GMAT Sentence Correction Discussions

Difference between because and in that. First, using pure strategy, when GMAC puts both because and in that, the answer is most likely in that. Second, because is used to express a simple causal relationship whereas in that qualifies the previous statement.

:)Confused? Look at these examples:

Cause and effect relationship: I went to sleep because I was tired. ==> Being tired caused me to go to sleep.

Qualification: Going to college is a sacrifice in that doing so requires several years of forgoing the income that students could have earned had they not attended college. ==> Going to college is a sacrifice, BUT NOT IN EVERY WAY; there are many ways in which going to college is NOT a sacrifice, but in this sentence, I want to express one way in which going to college IS a sacrifice.

In our SC, "in that" is more precise than "because." "because" is actually wrong in this sentence, but a lot of my students, when they ask about this question, adamantly believe that it is correct, so instead of explaining why "because" is wrong, I explain why "in that" is better. This usually does the trick.

In 1791 Robert Carter III, one of the wealthiest plantation owners in Virginia, stunned his family, friends, and neighbors by filing a deed of emancipation, setting free the more than 500 slaves who were legally considered his property.
(A) setting free the more than 500 slaves who were legally considered
(B) setting free more than the 500 slaves legally considered as
(C) and set free more than 500 slaves, who were legally considered as
(D) and set free more than the 500 slaves who were legally considered


(E) and he set free the more than 500 slaves who were legally considered as
As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision, it would be rated about 20/500. or legally blind if it were an adult with such vision.
(A) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision, it would be rated about 20/500, or legally blind if it were an adult with such vision.
(B) A baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision that would be rated about 20/500, or legally blind as an adult
(C) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb, its rudimentary sense of vision would be rated about 20/500; qualifying it to be legally blind if an adult
(D) A baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision that would be rated about 20/500; an adult with such vision would be deemed legally blind.
(E) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb, its rudimentary sense of vision, which would deemed legally blind for an adult, would be rated about 20/500

Dirt roads may evoke the bucolic simplicity of another century, but financially strained townships point out that dirt roads cost twice as much as maintaining paved roads.
(A) dirt roads cost twice as much as maintaining paved roads
(B) dirt roads cost twice as much to maintain as paved roads do
(C) maintaining dirt roads costs twice as much as paved roads do
(D) maintaining dirt roads costs twice as much as it does for paved roads
(E) to maintain dirt roads costs twice as much as for paved roads


P-Folks,
find my answers in color.
1.(A)-->Tense and clear parallelism.
2.(D)-->We are not considering similarity, hence "as" is out, After semicolon refrence of baby is with adult which is in the start of sentence.
3.(B)--->even though idiom as much as is correct but cost is related to maintainence of road i.e "do".

cheers !
check y'days posts.. this was answered y'day also.. :drinking:

the answer must be option A ;)


so its because of cause and effect model.....setting free....., he stunned....

cause D looked to me quite close and I really couldn' find any reason as why we should discrad....

i know we all have done it so many times and its from OG10, just wanted to understand as why not D?
66. Scientists have recently received permission to research embryonic stem cells, derived from blastocysts or early-stage embryos, that they believe to be capable of generating new cell growth and curing previously incurable ailments.
(A) that they believe to be capable
(B) that they believe are capable
(C) that they believe will be capable
(D) believed as capable
(E) believed to be capable
Just want to understand, 'that' refers to what in underline portion, cause my understanding is that any pronoun refers to immediate noun unless there is any conjuction joining 2 seperate clauses...
Hey!

I'm not able to understand the difference between the usage of "in that" and "because".

Please help.

An example:
The yield per acre of coffee berries varies enormously in that a single tree, depending on both its size and on climate and altitude, could produce enough berries to make between one and twelve pounds of dried beans a year.

A enormously in that a single tree, depending on both its size and on climate and altitude, could produce
B enormously in that a single tree, dependent on its size and also on climate and altitude, is able to produce
C enormously, because a single tree, depending on its size and on climate and altitude, is able to produce
D enormously, because a single tree, being dependent on its size, climate, and altitude, is capable of producing
E enormously, because a single tree, dependent on its size as well as on climate and altitude, could produce


Puys.
It has "depending" and "because" both, seems smooth than option(A)

whats OA?

66. Scientists have recently received permission to research embryonic stem cells, derived from blastocysts or early-stage embryos, that they believe to be capable of generating new cell growth and curing previously incurable ailments.
(A) that they believe to be capable
(B) that they believe are capable--->Need verb to follow.
(C) that they believe will be capable-->subjunctive mood need verb
(D) believed as capable---->Invalid sentence formation
(E) believed to be capable---->Invalid sentence formation.
Just want to understand, 'that' refers to what in underline portion, cause my understanding is that any pronoun refers to immediate noun unless there is any conjuction joining 2 seperate clauses...


My vote is for (A).

Whats OA?

cheers !
:drinking:
My vote is for (A).

Whats OA?

cheers !
:drinking:

pond, u didn't reply what i asked:)....."that" refers to what ??? i ur answer..
BTW, its A...and yes coming from subjunctive only..
pond, u didn't reply what i asked:)....."that" refers to what ??? i ur answer..
BTW, its A...and yes coming from subjunctive only..


That is referring to embryos and
they refers to scientists.

cheers !

1.Several studies have found that the coronary patients who exercise most actively have half or less than half the chance of dying of a heart attack as those who are sedentary.


(A) have half or less than half the chance of dying of a heart attack as those who are sedentary


(B) have half the chance, or less, of dying of a heart attack than those who are sedentary do


(C) have half the chance that they will die of a heart attack, or less, than those who are sedentary do


(D) are at least fifty percent less likely to die of a heart attack as those who are sedentary


(E) are at least fifty percent less likely than those who are sedentary to die of a heart attack
Question. The only way for growers to salvage frozen citrus is to process them quickly into juice concentrate before they rot when warmer weather returns.
(A) to process them quickly into juice concentrate before they rot when warmer weather returns
(B) if they are quickly processed into juice concentrate before warmer weather returns to rot them
(C) for them to be processed quickly into juice concentrate before the fruit rots when warmer weather
returns
(D) if the fruit is quickly processed into juice concentrate before they rot when warmer weather returns
(E) to have it quickly processed into juice concentrate before warmer weather returns and rots the fruit

Good stuff man.. thanks!!

Difference between because and in that. First, using pure strategy, when GMAC puts both because and in that, the answer is most likely in that. Second, because is used to express a simple causal relationship whereas in that qualifies the previous statement.

:)Confused? Look at these examples:

Cause and effect relationship: I went to sleep because I was tired. ==> Being tired caused me to go to sleep.

Qualification: Going to college is a sacrifice in that doing so requires several years of forgoing the income that students could have earned had they not attended college. ==> Going to college is a sacrifice, BUT NOT IN EVERY WAY; there are many ways in which going to college is NOT a sacrifice, but in this sentence, I want to express one way in which going to college IS a sacrifice.

In our SC, "in that" is more precise than "because." "because" is actually wrong in this sentence, but a lot of my students, when they ask about this question, adamantly believe that it is correct, so instead of explaining why "because" is wrong, I explain why "in that" is better. This usually does the trick.



P-Folks,
find my answers in color.
1.(A)-->Tense and clear parallelism.
2.(D)-->We are not considering similarity, hence "as" is out, After semicolon refrence of baby is with adult which is in the start of sentence.
3.(B)--->even though idiom as much as is correct but cost is related to maintainence of road i.e "do".

cheers !
Question:Defense attorneys have occasionally argued that their clients' misconduct stemmed from a reaction to something ingested, but in attributing criminal or delinquent behavior to some food allergy, the perpetrators are in effect told that they are not responsible for their actions.

(A) in attributing criminal or delinquent behavior to some food allergy

(B) if criminal or delinquent behavior is attributed to an allergy to some food

(C) in attributing behavior that is criminal or delinquent to an allergy to some food

(D) if some food allergy is attributed as the cause of criminal or delinquent behavior

(E) in attributing a food allergy as the cause of criminal or delinquent behavior
My vote is for (A).

Whats OA?

cheers !
:drinking:

ponds, could u explain problems with B and C in more detail pls?

go with elimination approach...
option A is wordy
option B & C say "have half the chance" means exact 50%.. this is awkward.. avoid it..
option D uses "less likely...as".. incorrect usage of "as"
the only option leftis option E... it must be correct..

lemme know the OA.. ;)


1.Several studies have found that the coronary patients who exercise most actively have half or less than half the chance of dying of a heart attack as those who are sedentary.


(A) have half or less than half the chance of dying of a heart attack as those who are sedentary


(B) have half the chance, or less, of dying of a heart attack than those who are sedentary do


(C) have half the chance that they will die of a heart attack, or less, than those who are sedentary do


(D) are at least fifty percent less likely to die of a heart attack as those who are sedentary


(E) are at least fifty percent less likely than those who are sedentary to die of a heart attack

Please Find the OA's for all the questions:-

Originally Posted by VIKX View Post
1)Federal authorities involved in the investigation have found the local witnesses are difficult to locate, reticent.and are suspicious of strangers.

(A) the local witnesses are difficult to locate, reticent, and are
(B) local witnesses to be difficult to locate, reticent, and are
(C) that local witnesses are difficult to locate, reticent, and
(D) local witnesses are difficult to locate and reticent, and they are
(E) that local witnesses are difficult to locate and reticent, and they are


2)In 1791 Robert Carter III, one of the wealthiest plantation owners in Virginia, stunned his family, friends, and neighbors by filing a deed of emancipation, setting free the more than 500 slaves who were legally considered his property.
(A) setting free the more than 500 slaves who were legally considered
(B) setting free more than the 500 slaves legally considered as
(C) and set free more than 500 slaves, who were legally considered as
(D) and set free more than the 500 slaves who were legally considered


(E) and he set free the more than 500 slaves who were legally considered as



3)A number of linguists contend that all of the thousands of languages spoken by the world's five billion people can be traced back to a common root language.
(A) that all of the thousands of languages spoken by the world's five billion people can be traced
(B) that the world's five billion people speak thousands of languages of which all can be traced
(C) the world's five billion people speak thousands of languages which are all traceable
(D) all of the thousands of languages spoken by the world's five billion people to be traceable


(E) the ability to trace all of the thousands of languages that are spoken by the world's five billion people


4)While some propose to combat widespread illegal copying of computer programs by attempting to change people's attitudes toward pirating, others by suggesting reducing software prices to decrease the incentive for pirating, and still others by calling for the prosecution of those who copy software illegally.
(A) by suggesting reducing software prices to decrease the incentive for pirating, and still others by calling
(B) by suggesting the reduction of software prices to decrease the incentive for pirating, and still others call
(C) suggest the reduction of software prices for decreasing the incentive for pirating, and still others call
(D) suggest the reduction of software prices to decrease the incentive for pirating, and still others by calling


(E) suggest reducing software prices to decrease the incentive for pirating, and still others are calling

5)Found throughout Central and South America, sloths hang from trees by long rubbery limbs and sleep fifteen hours a day. moving infrequently enough that two species of algae grow on its coat and between its toes.
(A) sloths hang from trees by long rubbery limbs and sleep fifteen hours a day, moving infrequently enough
(B) sloths hang from trees by long rubbery limbs, they sleep fifteen hours a day, and with such infrequent movements
(C) sloths use their long rubbery limbs to hang from trees, sleep fifteen hours a day, and move so infrequently
(D) the sloth hangs from trees by its long rubbery limbs, sleeping fifteen hours a day and moving so infrequently
(E) the sloth hangs from trees by its long rubbery limbs, sleeps fifteen hours a day, and it moves infrequently enough


1.Several studies have found that the coronary patients who exercise most actively have half or less than half the chance of dying of a heart attack as those who are sedentary.


(A) have half or less than half the chance of dying of a heart attack as those who are sedentary


(B) have half the chance, or less, of dying of a heart attack than those who are sedentary do


(C) have half the chance that they will die of a heart attack, or less, than those who are sedentary do


(D) are at least fifty percent less likely to die of a heart attack as those who are sedentary


(E) are at least fifty percent less likely than those who are sedentary to die of a heart attack



Between D and E...

less likely THAN OR less likely AS...

I'll go with E...:thumbsup:

this was easy.. it must be option E

The only way for growers to salvage frozen citrus is _____________.
which can also be represented in the form as below;
The only way ......... is to xyz

citrus is singular.. so find an option with "it"

option E is the only option with the above 2 conditions satisfied... so the answer must be option E

please confirm the OA ;)

Question. The only way for growers to salvage frozen citrus is to process them quickly into juice concentrate before they rot when warmer weather returns.
(A) to process them quickly into juice concentrate before they rot when warmer weather returns
(B) if they are quickly processed into juice concentrate before warmer weather returns to rot them
(C) for them to be processed quickly into juice concentrate before the fruit rots when warmer weather
returns
(D) if the fruit is quickly processed into juice concentrate before they rot when warmer weather returns
(E) to have it quickly processed into juice concentrate before warmer weather returns and rots the fruit
Defense attorneys have occasionally argued that their clients' misconduct stemmed from a reaction to
something ingested, but in attributing criminal or delinquent behavior to some food allergy, the perpetrators
are in effect told that they are not responsible for their actions.
(A) in attributing criminal or delinquent behavior to some food allergy
(B) if criminal or delinquent behavior is attributed to an allergy to some food
(C) in attributing behavior that is criminal or delinquent to an allergy to some food
(D) if some food allergy is attributed as the cause of criminal or delinquent behavior
(E) in attributing a food allergy as the cause of criminal or delinquent behavior


pretty confusing to me without the underline thing.. :lookround:
Question. The only way for growers to salvage frozen citrus is to process them quickly into juice concentrate before they rot when warmer weather returns.
(A) to process them quickly into juice concentrate before they rot when warmer weather returns
(B) if they are quickly processed into juice concentrate before warmer weather returns to rot them
(C) for them to be processed quickly into juice concentrate before the fruit rots when warmer weather
returns
(D) if the fruit is quickly processed into juice concentrate before they rot when warmer weather returns
(E) to have it quickly processed into juice concentrate before warmer weather returns and rots the fruit


"Pronouns...its all pronouns..." + parallelism...

to salvage is TO, left with A & E...

A...has they...which refers to :nono:...so has to be E

Several studies have found that the coronary patients who exercise most actively have half or less than half the chance of dying of a heart attack as those who are sedentary.


(A) have half or less than half the chance of dying of a heart attack as those who are sedentary


(B) have half the chance, or less, of dying of a heart attack than those who are sedentary do


(C) have half the chance that they will die of a heart attack, or less, than those who are sedentary do


(D) are at least fifty percent less likely to die of a heart attack as those who are sedentary


(E) are at least fifty percent less likely than those who are sedentary to die of a heart attack


OA plz?

I would have marked option B

66. Scientists have recently received permission to research embryonic stem cells, derived from blastocysts or early-stage embryos, that they believe to be capable of generating new cell growth and curing previously incurable ailments.
(A) that they believe to be capable
(B) that they believe are capable
(C) that they believe will be capable
(D) believed as capable
(E) believed to be capable
Just want to understand, 'that' refers to what in underline portion, cause my understanding is that any pronoun refers to immediate noun unless there is any conjuction joining 2 seperate clauses...