Hii puys
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Check out my blog life @ dipankar , hope u enjoyin readin it. please do comment.
cheers,
dips.
Hii puys,
Check out my blog life @ dipankar , hope u enjoyin readin it. please do comment.
cheers,
dips.
A well-written blog.....simple yet soulful posts.....Keep writing! :):)
Hi puys...
here you go
Idle thoughts
I have just started blogging and my blog is all about my experiences ,movie-books reviews.. in all a compilation of my idle thoughts and nothing remotely intelligent
Enjoy!!
here you go
Idle thoughts
I have just started blogging and my blog is all about my experiences ,movie-books reviews.. in all a compilation of my idle thoughts and nothing remotely intelligent
Enjoy!!
Finally, after a hiatus of a fortnight, Blog Updated: 
7 Reasons Why Smoking is Good!
Note- Its a sarcastic Post about the ill-effects of smoking.. :nono:
Happy Blogging, Puys.. π
I came across this one. It seems to be a new one, with mostly humorous posts. Some rather funny ones there so sharing it with everyone. Check it out:
The Notebook
awesome blogs here.
My take on auto rickshaws n taxi walas in mumbai :
The world around me...
Can I expect a few honest reviews of my blog please... π
My take on auto rickshaws n taxi walas in mumbai :
The world around me...
Can I expect a few honest reviews of my blog please... :)
Yeah sure! :):) Why not? π π
Prerna Munshi SaysMy first stint as an amateur poet...... A never ending horizon.....: The Man in my life......
Hey hi,
Just read your post.. liked the concept and your thought process but I felt the lines "Who else other than YOU" was too repetitive... This reduced the wonderful effect that it had in the beginning of the poem. The poem started off b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l-l-y. Made me read on.. but then i felt you fell short of a good ending. I felt it ended adruptly. May be, just may be, if you would have carried the stanzas (with same basic essence) from childhood to teens, it would have created a much better effect.
Its just my honest opinion (you asked for it !! :D) and I may be wrong but thats what I felt.
Hope it helps. π
Hey hi,
Just read your post.. liked the concept and your thought process but I felt the lines "Who else other than YOU" was too repetitive... This reduced the wonderful effect that it had in the beginning of the poem. The poem started off b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l-l-y. Made me read on.. but then i felt you fell short of a good ending. I felt it ended adruptly. May be, just may be, if you would have carried the stanzas (with same basic essence) from childhood to teens, it would have created a much better effect.
Its just my honest opinion (you asked for it !! :D) and I may be wrong but thats what I felt.
Hope it helps. :)
Yeps, even I had felt the same thing. "Who else" did sound reiterating to me as well but as I have said it was my 1st stint as an amateur poet.
I am really thankful to you for your honest feedback.Means a lot to me. :):)
THANK -YOU! :):)
