GMAT Sentence Correction Discussions

I think B is correct.
In C, signal a connection sounds like the modem is signalling to connection. Besides, "it" goes dangling if you take a closer look.
Open to comments...


1) it refers to connection

2) "signal a connection": means that it indicates whether a connection is present.

Check this:
Cross the road when the traffic signal shows a green light?
Does that mean that the traffic signal signals to a green light?

1. "it" can as well refer to modem. Therefore I find it dangling.
2. In the example you gave: signal here is a noun has a verb "shows". But in the problem, signal is a verb. I don't the analogy.
BTW, now I am very eager to know the oa :)


1) it refers to connection

2) "signal a connection": means that it indicates whether a connection is present.

Check this:
Cross the road when the traffic signal shows a green light?
Does that mean that the traffic signal signals to a green light?
According to a survey of graduating medical students conducted by the Association of American Medical Colleges, minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice in socioeconomically deprived areas.

(A) minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice---Absurd sentence formation.
(B) minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than other graduates who plan on practicing--Unidiomatic.
(C) minority graduates are nearly four times as likely as other graduates to plan on practicing---Correct usage of idioms and clear parallelism. Correct
(D) it is nearly four times more likely that minority graduates rather than other graduates will plan to practice---weird
(E) it is nearly four times as likely for minority graduates than other graduates to plan to practice ----too much wordy.


Hi docsmile,

Find my answer in green color.


Regards,

Question.According to some analysts, whatever its merits, the proposal to tax away all capital gains on short-term investments would, if enacted, have a disastrous effect on Wall Street trading and employment.


(A) its merits, the proposal to tax


(B) its merits may be, the proposal of taxing


(C) its merits as a proposal, taxing


(D) the proposal's merits, to tax


(E) the proposal's merits are, taxing

I pick A.
Here, the proposal if enacted will have a disastrous effect. To that end, proposal to tax sounds more appropriate than proposal of taxing.
D maintains this but fails to retain the relationship of proposal with tax.

Question.According to some analysts, whatever its merits, the proposal to tax away all capital gains on short-term investments would, if enacted, have a disastrous effect on Wall Street trading and employment.


(A) its merits, the proposal to tax


(B) its merits may be, the proposal of taxing


(C) its merits as a proposal, taxing


(D) the proposals merits, to tax


(E) the proposals merits are, taxing

Apologies for the delay in post..

Any cable modem will occasionally fail to signal that there is a connection when it is present and mark that there is one when there is not.

A. that there is a connection when it is present and mark that there is one.
B. when a connection is present and mark that there is one.
C. a connection when it is present and mark that there is one.
D. the presence of a connection when it is there and mark its presence.
OA is C

According to a survey of graduating medical students conducted by the Association of American Medical Colleges, minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice in socioeconomically deprived areas.

(A) minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice
looks good.
(B) minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than other graduates who plan on practicing
wrong : on practicing is wrong usage.
(C) minority graduates are nearly four times as likely as other graduates to plan on practicing
wrong : on practicing is wrong usage.
(D) it is nearly four times more likely that minority graduates rather than other graduates will plan to practice
wroing : wordy .. alters meaning
(E) it is nearly four times as likely for minority graduates than other graduates to plan to practice
wrong : wordy.... unidiomatic


ans in red.

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Question: A large and increasingly influential sector of publishing, 20 percent of all the National and American Book awards since 1950 have gone to university-press books.

(A) A large and increasingly influential sector of publishing, 20 percent of all the National and American Book awards since 1950 have gone to university-press books.-modifier too far
(B) A large and increasingly influential sector of publishing, university-press books have won 20 percent of all the National and American Book awards since 1950.--Correct as modifier is near the subject ,t is modifying.
(C) Increasingly influential as a large sector of publishing, 20 percent of all the National and American Book awards since 1950 have gone to university-press books.--modifier is too far placed.
(D) Since 1950, a large and increasingly influential sector of publishing, 20 percent of all the National and American Book awards have gone to university-press books.--awkward sentence formation
(E) Since 1950, university-press books, a large and increasingly influential sector of publishing, won 20 percent of all the National and American Book awards from then on.--unclear whether a large inc infl sector of pub. and univ-press books are same.


My answer is B.
Explanations are mentioned inline.
Question.According to some analysts, whatever its merits, the proposal to tax away all capital gains on short-term investments would, if enacted, have a disastrous effect on Wall Street trading and employment.


(A) its merits, the proposal to tax


(B) its merits may be, the proposal of taxing


(C) its merits as a proposal, taxing


(D) the proposals merits, to tax


(E) the proposals merits are, taxing



According to some analysts, ... (.....)
would have a disastrous effect on Wall Street trading and employment, if enacted,

only 'proposal' can fill the gap ..
down to A,B...

A looks fine ..
B ..of taxing is awkward.

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Question.According to some analysts, whatever its merits, the proposal to tax away all capital gains on short-term investments would, if enacted, have a disastrous effect on Wall Street trading and employment.


(A) its merits, the proposal to tax--its (refers back to proposal).correct usage.


(B) its merits may be, the proposal of taxing--awkward sentence construction


(C) its merits as a proposal, taxing--merits as a proposal completely changes the meaning


(D) the proposals merits, to tax-wrong sentence--something's x used basically in caseof any person/thing


(E) the proposals merits are, taxing--similarly proposal's merits is wrong usage here


The explanations are mentioned inline.

1000th post

OA is C.I thought B was correct



ans in red.

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Originally Posted by docsmile View Post
According to a survey of graduating medical students conducted by the Association of American Medical Colleges, minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice in socioeconomically deprived areas.

(A) minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice
looks good.
(B) minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than other graduates who plan on practicing
wrong : on practicing is wrong usage.
(C) minority graduates are nearly four times as likely as other graduates to plan on practicing
wrong : on practicing is wrong usage.
(D) it is nearly four times more likely that minority graduates rather than other graduates will plan to practice
wroing : wordy .. alters meaning
(E) it is nearly four times as likely for minority graduates than other graduates to plan to practice
wrong : wordy.... unidiomatic

Good one!

Confused but will go with B. Though had "have" not been there in E, I would have picked E for sure.

I think we are talking about 2 events, both in the past. There is no indication that the latter part of 3 months is continued into the present.
Based on this, please find the explanation embedded in the post above.

Did I commit a blunder?


PearlCrystal-- the 2nd part uses a present perfect..else to indicate it continues..they might have used present perfect continuous tense of the verb unchange.. I think we can safely go with E.
Question.In a leveraged buyout, investors borrow huge sums of money to buy companies, hoping to pay off the debt by using the companys earnings and to profit richly by the later resale of the companies or their divisions.


(A) by using the companys earnings and to profit


(B) by using the companies earnings and by profiting


(C) using the companies earnings and profiting


(D) with the companys earnings, profiting


(E) with the companies earnings and to profit


My answer is C.

by using- is awkward and wordy. either choose by or using.
parallelism can be achieved here by meticulously checking hoping to pay and the -ing form after 'and'.
such as-->X-ing.. and Y-ing.
P.S.-Attempting all those questions which were posted yesterday evening.

Puys pls help me in this question.

The OA is A and not B.

Rest of the options can be easily eliminated.

Please share your explanations so as to why option B is incorrect.

Literary critics have often said that all of the thousands of stories written by the world's authors are essentially variations of six basic plot themes.
A. that all of the thousands of stories written by the world's authors are essentially variations of
B. that the world's authors have written thousands of stories which are essentially variations of
My explanation in support of option B is mentioned below:-
1-Pronoun 'which' clearly refers to "thousands of stories".
2-Stories consist of the variation of themes so it has to be mentioned near plot themes.
Please indicate the flaw in my reasoning along with your viewpoint.

Puys pls help me in this question.

The OA is A and not B.

Rest of the options can be easily eliminated.

Please share your explanations so as to why option B is incorrect.

Literary critics have often said that all of the thousand of stories written by the worlds authors are essentially variations of six basic plot themes.
A. that all of the thousand of stories written by the worlds authors are essentially variations of
B. that the worlds authors have written thousands of stories which are essentially variations of
My explanation in support of option B is mentioned below:-
1-Pronoun 'which' clearly refers to "thousands of stories".
2-Stories consist of the variation of themes so it has to be mentioned near plot themes.
Please indicate the flaw in my reasoning along with your viewpoint.


Two supports in favor of A-
1.world's author seems absurd
2.Which intriduces unconditional clause.in the context here the statement conveyed by which in B seems to be importnat for the entire sentence meaning.
here the important is the stories and not authors, so starting the sentence with stories put more stress on the entire sentence meaning.
Puys pls help me in this question.

The OA is A and not B.

Rest of the options can be easily eliminated.

Please share your explanations so as to why option B is incorrect.

Literary critics have often said that all of the thousand of stories written by the worlds authors are essentially variations of six basic plot themes.
A. that all of the thousand of stories written by the worlds authors are essentially variations of
B. that the worlds authors have written thousands of stories which are essentially variations of
My explanation in support of option B is mentioned below:-
1-Pronoun 'which' clearly refers to "thousands of stories".
2-Stories consist of the variation of themes so it has to be mentioned near plot themes.
Please indicate the flaw in my reasoning along with your viewpoint.


I think the sentence demands to keep stories as the subject and not the author.
(A) keeps thousand of stories as the subject, and tells us that the critics emphasize on the stories, which are variations of some plots.

(B) subject here is world's authors, and it looks like the sentence says "critics have often said that the worlds' authors have written thousand of stories" ... now this sentence doesn't contain the "which" part, and this is intentional to explain.
As Manhattan SC says, "which" part in sentences is optional, and the sentence still remains clear without the "which". So if we remove "which" from the second, the sentence holds no water!

In contrast with B, A uses "that" which is not optional and has to be used.

PS: I wonder I would've thought so much when attempting the question for the first time
I think the sentence demands to keep stories as the subject and not the author.
(A) keeps thousand of stories as the subject, and tells us that the critics emphasize on the stories, which are variations of some plots.

(B) subject here is world's authors, and it looks like the sentence says "critics have often said that the worlds' authors have written thousand of stories" ... now this sentence doesn't contain the "which" part, and this is intentional to explain.
As Manhattan SC says, "which" part in sentences is optional, and the sentence still remains clear without the "which". So if we remove "which" from the second, the sentence holds no water!

In contrast with B, A uses "that" which is not optional and has to be used.

PS: I wonder I would've thought so much when attempting the question for the first time

Really a good discussion going on here.

Thanks @Pearl and @GwG..

@Pearl I agree with the usage of Pronoun i.e. it should be avoided if possible. I came across a sentence in which pronoun was unnecessary.

the sentence is:-

Incorrect
Each of Johnson's children-Celdric,Ethan and Selena--were weak and ineffectual, very different from the great man himself.

This sentence can be corrected by removing unnecessary pronouns.

Correct
Johnson's children-Celdric,Ethan and Selena--were all weak and ineffectual.

I believe,I have to again go through the Pronoun chapter of Manhattan.

Also @GwG--world's author is used in both the sentences.

Hi Vyom ,
I think the description by perl is absolute in itself. Also the example by you is bingo too. The answer should be A

OA is C.I thought B was correct




Originally Posted by docsmile View Post
According to a survey of graduating medical students conducted by the Association of American Medical Colleges, minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice in socioeconomically deprived areas.
(A) minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice
looks good.
(B) minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than other graduates who plan on practicing
wrong : on practicing is wrong usage.
(C) minority graduates are nearly four times as likely as other graduates to plan on practicing
wrong : on practicing is wrong usage.
(D) it is nearly four times more likely that minority graduates rather than other graduates will plan to practice
wroing : wordy .. alters meaning
(E) it is nearly four times as likely for minority graduates than other graduates to plan to practice
wrong : wordy.... unidiomatic


my bad ..
thank u
Puys pls help me in this question.

The OA is A and not B.

Rest of the options can be easily eliminated.

Please share your explanations so as to why option B is incorrect.

Literary critics have often said that all of the thousand of stories written by the world's authors are essentially variations of six basic plot themes.
A. that all of the thousand of stories written by the world's authors are essentially variations of
B. that the world's authors have written thousands of stories which are essentially variations of
My explanation in support of option B is mentioned below:-
1-Pronoun 'which' clearly refers to "thousands of stories".
2-Stories consist of the variation of themes so it has to be mentioned near plot themes.
Please indicate the flaw in my reasoning along with your viewpoint.


au contraire to the intent of the discussion... my 2 cents in favor of option B:

1. the intent of the stmnt as i see it: not "each of the stories written by the world's author" but "thousands OF the stories written by the world's author"

2. "thousand of" is weird.. should be either "thousands of" or just "thousand"

3. ALL should be replaced by EACH

Would appreciate if someone can resolve these doubts.