GMAT Sentence Correction Discussions

Guys plz help

Although fruit can no longer grow once it is picked, it continues for some time to respire, taking in oxygen and giving off carbon dioxide, similar to the way human beings breathe.
(A) similar to the way human beings breathe
(B) similarly to human beings who are breathing
(C) just like the breathing of human beings
(D) as human beings when breathing
(E) just as human beings do when they breathe


I made a call between D and E..
IMO - E..

Reason parallelism + Comparison..

It continues to respire just as human beings do when they breathe

Answer please..

E should be the answer coz we are showing similarity between 2 nouns doing an act,OA please......

Guys plz help

Although fruit can no longer grow once it is picked, it continues for some time to respire, taking in oxygen and giving off carbon dioxide, similar to the way human beings breathe.
(A) similar to the way human beings breathe
(B) similarly to human beings who are breathing
(C) just like the breathing of human beings
(D) as human beings when breathing
(E) just as human beings do when they breathe

Just to add...

If I'm right, "Similar" is synonymous to "like" & should be used to compare nouns.

Please correct me if I'm wrong

Hey Puys,
Try these. My contribution for the day.

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1. After crude oil, natural gas is the United States second biggest fuel source and supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America.
(A)After crude oil, natural gas is the United States second biggest fuel source and supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America.
(B) Natural gas, after crude oil the United States second biggest fuel source, supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America.
(C)Being supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America, natural gas, the United States second biggest fuel source after crude oil.
(D) Natural gas, the United States second biggest fuel source after crude oil, is supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America.
(E) Natural gas is supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America, being the United States second biggest fuel source after crude oil.
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2. The airline industry is cutting its lowest discount fares more widely, more substantially, and earlier this year than it normally does at the end of the summer, a time during which travel usually decreases and the industry uses some lower fares for the attraction of passengers.
(A) during which travel usually decreases and the industry uses some lower fares for the attraction of

(B) during which travel usually decreases and therefore the industry will use some lower fares for the attraction of
(C) in which travel usually decreases and in which the industry therefore uses some lower fares attracting

(D) when travel usually decreases and the industry
uses some lower fares to attract
(E) when travel usually decreases and therefore the industry will use lower fares for the attraction of
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3. The aristocratic values expressed in the writings of Marguerite Yourcenar place her within the French classical tradition, as does her passionate interest in history, particularly Roman history.
(A) as does
(B) so do
(C) as do
(D) so is the case with
(E) similarly, does
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4. Selling several hundred thousand copies in six months, the publication of Maple Leaf Rag in 1899 was an instant hit, helping to establish Scott Joplin as the preeminent ragtime composer.
(A) Selling several hundred thousand copies in six months, the publication of Maple Leaf Rag in 1899 was an instant hit, helping to establish Scott Joplin as the preeminent ragtime composer.

(B) The publication in 1899 of Maple Leaf Rag
was an instant hit: in six months they sold several hundred thousand copies and it helped establish Scott Joplin as the preeminent ragtime composer.
(C)) Helping to establish Scott Joplin as the preeminent ragtime composer was the publication of Maple Leaf Rag in 1899, which was an instant hit: it sold several hundred thousand copies in six months.
(D) Maple Leaf Rag was an instant hit: it helped establish Scott Joplin as the preeminent ragtime composer, published in 1899 and selling several hundred thousand copies in six months.
(E) Published in 1899, Maple Leaf Rag was an instant hit, selling several hundred thousand copies in six months: it helped establish Scott Joplin as the preeminent ragtime composer.
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5. Because paper of all kinds is the biggest single component of municipal trash, many municipalities have tried recycling to reduce the cost of trash disposal.
(A) Because paper of all kinds is the biggest single component of municipal trash, many municipalities have tried recycling to reduce the cost of trash disposal.
(B) Because paper of all kinds is the biggest single component in municipal trash, many municipalities tried to recycle so that the cost of trash disposal is reduced.
(C) Because paper of all kinds are the biggest single components in municipal trash, many municipalities have tried to recycle to reduce the cost of trash disposal.
(D) All kinds of paper are the biggest single components of municipal trash, and so many municipalities have tried recycling to reduce the cost of trash disposal.
(E) All kinds of paper is the biggest single component of municipal trash, so many municipalities have tried to recycle so that the cost of trash disposal could be reduced.
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Although it claims to delve into political issues, television can be superficial such as when each of the three major networks broadcast exactly the same statement from a political candidate.

(A) superficial such as when each of the three major networks
(B) superficial, as can sometimes occur if all of the three major networks
(C) superficial if the three major networks all
(D) superficial whenever each of the three major networks
(E) superficial, as when the three major networks each


Good question...

Pick is the tense of verb: broadcast need a plural subject for sure..

filter this...A, D, E are gone..

B -> "Occur" ..remember this is only allowed with any natural phenomenon / calamity...

C - IMO...i hope i haven't overlooked anything..

cheers
Guys plz help

Although fruit can no longer grow once it is picked, it continues for some time to respire, taking in oxygen and giving off carbon dioxide, similar to the way human beings breathe.
(A) similar to the way human beings breathe
(B) similarly to human beings who are breathing
(C) just like the breathing of human beings
(D) as human beings when breathing
(E) just as human beings do when they breathe



IMO E.

BCD are incorrect and can be eliminated.

since we are comparing actions just as is more precise.

Whats the OA?
docsmile Says
E should be the answer coz we are showing similarity between 2 nouns doing an act,OA please......



Docsmile

Like is used to compare the nouns and as is used to compare clauses.

E should be the answer here coz it corrects the subject and verb agreement problem (verb here is plural-broadcast)

Although it claims to delve into political issues, television can be superficial such as when each of the three major networks broadcast exactly the same statement from a political candidate.

(A) superficial such as when each of the three major networks
(B) superficial, as can sometimes occur if all of the three major networks
(C) superficial if the three major networks all
(D) superficial whenever each of the three major networks
(E) superficial, as when the three major networks each

Hey Puys,


Try these. My contribution for the day.

_______________________________________________________________________


1. After crude oil, natural gas is the United States second biggest fuel source and supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America.



(A)After crude oil, natural gas is the United States second biggest fuel source and supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America.

(B) Natural gas, after crude oil the United States second biggest fuel source, supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America.

(C)Being supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America, natural gas, the United States second biggest fuel source after crude oil.

(D) Natural gas, the United States' second biggest fuel source after crude oil, is supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America.

(E) Natural gas is supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America, being the United States' second biggest fuel source after crude oil.


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A. Incorrect : "natural gas is the United States second biggest fuel source" ... Shouldn't a possessive case be used here ? Or would that be the error
B. Incorrect : "after crude oil the United States" .. Sounds weird
C. Incorrect : Usage of "being"
D. Most closest, However I'm not thoroughly convinced
E. Incorrect: Usage of "being"


Please post the OA
Although it claims to delve into political issues, television can be superficial such as when each of the three major networks broadcast exactly the same statement from a political candidate.

(A) superficial such as when each of the three major networks
(B) superficial, as can sometimes occur if all of the three major networks
(C) superficial if the three major networks all
(D) superficial whenever each of the three major networks
(E) superficial, as when the three major networks each



IMO A.

we use such as for examples and the sentence here is giving an example.

Whats the OA?

To be precise:
Just as is used to focus on 2 nouns doing 2 actions
Just like is used to focus on 2 nouns


Docsmile

Like is used to compare the nouns and as is used to compare clauses.

Siddhartha,

As can also be used to give example and option A)does not fulfill subject -verb agreement.

IMO A.

we use such as for examples and the sentence here is giving an example.

Whats the OA?
Siddhartha,

As can also be used to give example and option A)does not fulfill subject -verb agreement.



Hmm I missed that one.

Hey Puys,


Try these. My contribution for the day.

_______________________________________________________________________


1. After crude oil, natural gas is the United States second biggest fuel source and supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America.
(A)After crude oil, natural gas is the United States second biggest fuel source and supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America.
(B) Natural gas, after crude oil the United States second biggest fuel source, supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America.
(C)Being supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America, natural gas, the United States second biggest fuel source after crude oil.
(D) Natural gas, the United States second biggest fuel source after crude oil, is supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America.
(E) Natural gas is supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America, being the United States second biggest fuel source after crude oil.


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2. The airline industry is cutting its lowest discount
fares more widely, more substantially, and earlier this
year than it normally does at the end of the summer,
a time during which travel usually decreases and the
industry uses some lower fares for the attraction of
passengers.
(A) during which travel usually decreases and the industry uses some lower fares for the attraction of
(B) during which travel usually decreases and therefore the industry will use some lower fares for the attraction of
(C) in which travel usually decreases and in which the industry therefore uses some lower fares attracting
(D) when travel usually decreases and the industry uses some lower fares to attract
(E) when travel usually decreases and therefore the industry will use lower fares for the attraction of


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3. The aristocratic values expressed in the writings of
Marguerite Yourcenar place her within the French
classical tradition, as does her passionate interest in
history, particularly Roman history.
(A) as does (i'm little skepti about D also as i'm )
(B) so do
(C) as do
(D) so is the case with
(E) similarly, does


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4. Selling several hundred thousand copies in six months,
the publication of Maple Leaf Rag in 1899 was an
instant hit, helping to establish Scott Joplin as the
preeminent ragtime composer.
cofused between A and E... would like to go for A
(A) Selling several hundred thousand copies in six
months, the publication of Maple Leaf Rag
in 1899 was an instant hit, helping to establish
Scott Joplin as the preeminent ragtime
composer.
(B) The publication in 1899 of Maple Leaf Rag
was an instant hit: in six months they sold
several hundred thousand copies and it helped
establish Scott Joplin as the preeminent ragtime
composer.
(C)) Helping to establish Scott Joplin as the preemi-
nent ragtime composer was the publication of
Maple Leaf Rag in 1899, which was an
instant hit: it sold several hundred thousand
copies in six months.
(D) Maple Leaf Rag was an instant hit: it helped
establish Scott Joplin as the preeminent ragtime
composer, published in 1899 and selling sev-
eral hundred thousand copies in six months.
(E) Published in 1899, Maple Leaf Rag was an
instant hit, selling several hundred thousand
copies in six months: it helped establish Scott
Joplin as the preeminent ragtime composer.


_______________________________________________________________________




5. Because paper of all kinds is the biggest single component of municipal trash, many municipalities have tried recycling to reduce the cost of trash disposal.
(A) Because paper of all kinds is the biggest single
component of municipal trash, many munici-
palities have tried recycling to reduce the cost
of trash disposal.
(B) Because paper of all kinds is the biggest single
component in municipal trash, many munici-
palities tried to recycle so that the cost of trash
disposal is reduced.
(C) Because paper of all kinds are the biggest single
components in municipal trash, many munici-
palities have tried to recycle to reduce the cost
of trash disposal.
(D) All kinds of paper are the biggest single compo-
nents of municipal trash, and so many munici-
palities have tried recycling to reduce the cost
of trash disposal.
(E) All kinds of paper is the biggest single compo-
nent of municipal trash, so many municipalities
have tried to recycle so that the cost of trash
disposal could be reduced.


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OA please.................

Good ones.. my answers are in bold..
plz share the OAs ;)

Hey Puys,

Try these. My contribution for the day.

________________________________________________________

1. After crude oil, natural gas is the United States second biggest fuel source and supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America.

(A)After crude oil, natural gas is the United States second biggest fuel source and supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America.

(B) Natural gas, after crude oil the United States second biggest fuel source, supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America.

(C)Being supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America, natural gas, the United States second biggest fuel source after crude oil.

(D) Natural gas, the United States second biggest fuel source after crude oil, is supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America.

(E) Natural gas is supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America, being the United States second biggest fuel source after crude oil.
________________________________________________________

2. The airline industry is cutting its lowest discount fares more widely, more substantially, and earlier this year than it normally does at the end of the summer, a time during which travel usually decreases and the industry uses some lower fares for the attraction of passengers.

(A) during which travel usually decreases and the industry uses some lower fares for the attraction of

(B) during which travel usually decreases and therefore the industry will use some lower fares for the attraction of

(C) in which travel usually decreases and in which the industry therefore uses some lower fares attracting

(D) when travel usually decreases and the industry uses some lower fares to attract

(E) when travel usually decreases and therefore the industry will use lower fares for the attraction of
________________________________________________________

3. The aristocratic values expressed in the writings of Marguerite Yourcenar place her within the French classical tradition, as does her passionate interest in history, particularly Roman history.

(A) as does
(B) so do
(C) as do
(D) so is the case with
(E) similarly, does
_______________________________________________________________________

4. Selling several hundred thousand copies in six months, the publication of Maple Leaf Rag in 1899 was an instant hit, helping to establish Scott Joplin as the preeminent ragtime composer.

(A) Selling several hundred thousand copies in six months, the publication of Maple Leaf Rag in 1899 was an instant hit, helping to establish Scott Joplin as the preeminent ragtime composer.

(B) The publication in 1899 of Maple Leaf Rag was an instant hit: in six months they sold several hundred thousand copies and it helped establish Scott Joplin as the preeminent ragtime composer.

(C)) Helping to establish Scott Joplin as the preeminent ragtime composer was the publication of Maple Leaf Rag in 1899, which was an instant hit: it sold several hundred thousand copies in six months.

(D) Maple Leaf Rag was an instant hit: it helped establish Scott Joplin as the preeminent ragtime composer, published in 1899 and selling several hundred thousand copies in six months.

(E) Published in 1899, Maple Leaf Rag was an instant hit, selling several hundred thousand copies in six months: it helped establish Scott Joplin as the preeminent ragtime composer.
_______________________________________________________________________

5. Because paper of all kinds is the biggest single component of municipal trash, many municipalities have tried recycling to reduce the cost of trash disposal.

(A) Because paper of all kinds is the biggest single component of municipal trash, many municipalities have tried recycling to reduce the cost of trash disposal - NOT SURE
(B) Because paper of all kinds is the biggest single component in municipal trash, many municipalities tried to recycle so that the cost of trash disposal is reduced.

(C) Because paper of all kinds are the biggest single components in municipal trash, many municipalities have tried to recycle to reduce the cost of trash disposal.

(D) All kinds of paper are the biggest single components of municipal trash, and so many municipalities have tried recycling to reduce the cost of trash disposal.

(E) All kinds of paper is the biggest single component of municipal trash, so many municipalities have tried to recycle so that the cost of trash disposal could be reduced.
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To be precise:
Just as is used to focus on 2 nouns doing 2 actions
Just like is used to focus on 2 nouns


tell you what..."Just Like" seems quite handy in day-2-day but it is WRONG in Gmat...watch out for it
Guys plz help

Although fruit can no longer grow once it is picked, it continues for some time to respire, taking in oxygen and giving off carbon dioxide, similar to the way human beings breathe.
(A) similar to the way human beings breathe
(B) similarly to human beings who are breathing
(C) just like the breathing of human beings
(D) as human beings when breathing
(E) just as human beings do when they breathe


I would have marked option C

The only confusion I believe is between option C and option E.. to kill the confusion I omitted the middle sentence (unwanted part for me)

Although fruit can no longer grow once it is picked, it continues for some time to respire, taking in oxygen and giving off carbon dioxide, ______

so the answer should fit the new sentence (without the highlighted section above) fine..

Although fruit can no longer grow once it is picked, it continues for some time to respire, _just like the breathing of human beings_

Comparing the respiration in fruits with the breathing (aka respiration) in human beings..

so the correct answer must be option C

please share the OA ;)

My take.OAs please

Hey Puys,

Try these. My contribution for the day.

________________________________________________________

1. After crude oil, natural gas is the United States second biggest fuel source and supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America.

(A)After crude oil, natural gas is the United States second biggest fuel source and supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America.

(B) Natural gas, after crude oil the United States second biggest fuel source, supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America.

(C)Being supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America, natural gas, the United States second biggest fuel source after crude oil.

(D) Natural gas, the United States second biggest fuel source after crude oil, is supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America.

(E) Natural gas is supplied almost exclusively from reserves in North America, being the United States second biggest fuel source after crude oil.
________________________________________________________

2. The airline industry is cutting its lowest discount fares more widely, more substantially, and earlier this year than it normally does at the end of the summer, a time during which travel usually decreases and the industry uses some lower fares for the attraction of passengers.

(A) during which travel usually decreases and the industry uses some lower fares for the attraction of

(B) during which travel usually decreases and therefore the industry will use some lower fares for the attraction of

(C) in which travel usually decreases and in which the industry therefore uses some lower fares attracting

(D) when travel usually decreases and the industry uses some lower fares to attract

(E) when travel usually decreases and therefore the industry will use lower fares for the attraction of
________________________________________________________

3. The aristocratic values expressed in the writings of Marguerite Yourcenar place her within the French classical tradition, as does her passionate interest in history, particularly Roman history.

(A) as does
(B) so do
(C) as do
(D) so is the case with
(E) similarly, does
_______________________________________________________________________

4. Selling several hundred thousand copies in six months, the publication of Maple Leaf Rag in 1899 was an instant hit, helping to establish Scott Joplin as the preeminent ragtime composer.

(A) Selling several hundred thousand copies in six months, the publication of Maple Leaf Rag in 1899 was an instant hit, helping to establish Scott Joplin as the preeminent ragtime composer.

(B) The publication in 1899 of Maple Leaf Rag was an instant hit: in six months they sold several hundred thousand copies and it helped establish Scott Joplin as the preeminent ragtime composer.

(C)) Helping to establish Scott Joplin as the preeminent ragtime composer was the publication of Maple Leaf Rag in 1899, which was an instant hit: it sold several hundred thousand copies in six months.

(D) Maple Leaf Rag was an instant hit: it helped establish Scott Joplin as the preeminent ragtime composer, published in 1899 and selling several hundred thousand copies in six months.

(E) Published in 1899, Maple Leaf Rag was an instant hit, selling several hundred thousand copies in six months: it helped establish Scott Joplin as the preeminent ragtime composer.
_______________________________________________________________________

5. Because paper of all kinds is the biggest single component of municipal trash, many municipalities have tried recycling to reduce the cost of trash disposal.

(A) Because paper of all kinds is the biggest single component of municipal trash, many municipalities have tried recycling to reduce the cost of trash disposal.

(B) Because paper of all kinds is the biggest single component in municipal trash, many municipalities tried to recycle so that the cost of trash disposal is reduced.

(C) Because paper of all kinds are the biggest single components in municipal trash, many municipalities have tried to recycle to reduce the cost of trash disposal.

(D) All kinds of paper are the biggest single components of municipal trash, and so many municipalities have tried recycling to reduce the cost of trash disposal.

(E) All kinds of paper is the biggest single component of municipal trash, so many municipalities have tried to recycle so that the cost of trash disposal could be reduced.
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Well, thats the GMAT rule i read somewhere.


amsey1382 Says
tell you what..."Just Like" seems quite handy in day-2-day but it is WRONG in Gmat...watch out for it
Guys plz help

Although fruit can no longer grow once it is picked, it continues for some time to respire, taking in oxygen and giving off carbon dioxide, similar to the way human beings breathe.
(A) similar to the way human beings breathe
(B) similarly to human beings who are breathing
(C) just like the breathing of human beings
(D) as human beings when breathing
(E) just as human beings do when they breathe


Hi continental,

My vote is for Option-E.

Option-a: Unidiomatic.
Option-b:Looks weird.
Option-C: Incorrect sentence formation.
Option-d: Subject-Verb agreement.

Cheers !
:cheers: