GMAT Sentence Correction Discussions

Try this one:
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It is characteristic of the Metropolitan Museum of Art, as of virtually every great American museum the taste of local collectors has played at least as large a part in the formation of their collections as has the judgments of the art historian.

(A) of virtually every great American museum, the taste of local collectors has played at least as large a part in the formation of their collections as has

(B) of virtual1y every great American museum, that the taste of local collectors has played at 1east as large a part in the formation of their collections as has

(C) it is of virtually every great American museum,that the taste of local collectors has played at least as large a part in the formation of its collections as have

(D) it is of virtual1y every great American museum,that the taste of local collectors have played at least as large a part in the formation of its collections as have

(E) it is of vlrtual1y every great American museum,the taste of local collectors has played at least as large a part in the formation of its collections as has


Yes, most of you got it.

OA is : C

find the answer here..

http://www.pagalguy.com/forum/gmat-and-related-discussions/20698-gmat-sentence-correction-discussions-430.html#post1609568

the person who posted it is yet to confirm the OA I guess... but I believe its option E.. ;)

Please try this question and give answer with complete explaination...

The Questions is like this --

John Maynard Keynes, the greatest economist of the twentieth century, once wrote an essay on another Cambridge genius, the scientist and mathematician Isaac Newton.


a)the greatest economist of the twentieth century, once wrote an essay on another Cambridge genius, the scientist and mathematician
b)the great economist of the twentieth century, once wrote an essay on another Cambridge genius, the scientist and mathematician
c)the greatest economist of the twentieth century, once wrote an essay about another Cambridge genius, the scientist and mathematician
d)the greatest economist of the twentieth century, once wrote an essay on another Cambridge genius, who was a scientist and the mathematician
e)who was one of the greatest economists in the twentieth century, once wrote an essay on another Cambridge genius, the scientist and mathematician
find the answer here..

http://www.pagalguy.com/forum/gmat-and-related-discussions/20698-gmat-sentence-correction-discussions-430.html#post1609568

the person who posted it is yet to confirm the OA I guess... but I believe its option E.. ;)



The OA is "A"...what i need is proper explaination.
VIKX Says
The OA is "A"...what i need is proper explaination.


well.. if the ques is NOT from OG.. then the OA is questionable.. just kidding..

I think Vyomb has the expln.. browse back a little..
well.. if the ques is NOT from OG.. then the OA is questionable.. just kidding..

I think Vyomb has the expln.. browse back a little..



Where??????

Try this:
A leading figure in the Scottish enlightenment, Adam Smiths two major books are to democratic capitalism what Marxs Das Kapital is to socialism.

  1. Adam Smiths two major books are to democratic capitalism what
  2. Adam Smiths two major books are to democratic capitalism like
  3. Adam Smiths two major books are to democratic capitalism just as
  4. Adam Smith wrote two major books that are to democratic capitalism similar to
  5. Adam Smith wrote two major books that are to democratic capitalism what
Try this:
A leading figure in the Scottish enlightenment, Adam Smiths two major books are to democratic capitalism what Marxs Das Kapital is to socialism.
  1. Adam Smiths two major books are to democratic capitalism what
  2. Adam Smiths two major books are to democratic capitalism like
  3. Adam Smiths two major books are to democratic capitalism just as
  4. Adam Smith wrote two major books that are to democratic capitalism similar to
  5. Adam Smith wrote two major books that are to democratic capitalism what

my money on E.

money hai tho honey hai ... explanation once OA is confirmed.

thanks

"A leading figure in the Scottish enlightenment" must refer to a person and NOT his books.. so discard option A, B and C

options left are;
Adam Smith wrote two major books that are to democratic capitalism similar to
Adam Smith wrote two major books that are to democratic capitalism what

original problem statement;
A leading figure in the Scottish enlightenment, ________ Marxs Das Kapital is to socialism.

Fill in the blank above.. from option D "similar to" is awkward.. so by rule of elimination, left with option E.. Also option E holds on to the parallelism in the sentence..

so the correct answer must be option E

Try this:
A leading figure in the Scottish enlightenment, Adam Smiths two major books are to democratic capitalism what Marxs Das Kapital is to socialism.
  1. Adam Smiths two major books are to democratic capitalism what
  2. Adam Smiths two major books are to democratic capitalism like
  3. Adam Smiths two major books are to democratic capitalism just as
  4. Adam Smith wrote two major books that are to democratic capitalism similar to
  5. Adam Smith wrote two major books that are to democratic capitalism what
Try this:
A leading figure in the Scottish enlightenment, Adam Smiths two major books are to democratic capitalism what Marxs Das Kapital is to socialism.
  1. Adam Smiths two major books are to democratic capitalism what
  2. Adam Smiths two major books are to democratic capitalism like
  3. Adam Smiths two major books are to democratic capitalism just as
  4. Adam Smith wrote two major books that are to democratic capitalism similar to
  5. Adam Smith wrote two major books that are to democratic capitalism what




IMo E. Please post the OA

The choice is between D,E. E is more parallel and idiomatic.
IMo E. Please post the OA

The choice is between D,E. E is more parallel and idiomatic.


Originally Posted by amsey1382 View Post
Try this:
A leading figure in the Scottish enlightenment, Adam Smiths two major books are to democratic capitalism what Marxs
Das Kapital is to socialism.


  1. Adam Smiths two major books are to democratic capitalism what
  2. Adam Smiths two major books are to democratic capitalism like
  3. Adam Smiths two major books are to democratic capitalism just as
  4. Adam Smith wrote two major books that are to democratic capitalism similar to
  5. Adam Smith wrote two major books that are to democratic capitalism what

My answer is E.
A,B,C all pointing to wrond modifier.
D is awkward and not as idiomatic as E.

Try this one folks:-

In reference to the current hostility towards smoking, smokers frequently expressed anxiety that their prospects for being hired and promoted are being stunted by their habit.

a) In reference to the current hostility towards smoking, smokers frequently expressed anxiety that

b) Referring to the current hostility toward smoking, smokers frequently expressed anxiety about

c)When referring to the current hostility toward smoking, smokers frequently express anxiety about

d) With reference to the current hostility toward smoking, smokers frequently expressed anxiety about

e) Referring to the current hostility toward smoking, smokers frequently express anxiety that

note that the non-underlined section of the sentence is in present tense.. so we need to choose appropriate option.. this discards option A, B and D from possible answers...

____________ their prospects for being hired and promoted are being stunted by their habit.

so we are left with option C and E;
c)When referring to the current hostility toward smoking, smokers frequently express anxiety about

e) Referring to the current hostility toward smoking, smokers frequently express anxiety that


Option E makes an awkward sentence...

I would have marked option C

what is the OA plz.. ;)

Try this one folks:-

In reference to the current hostility towards smoking, smokers frequently expressed anxiety that their prospects for being hired and promoted are being stunted by their habit.

a) In reference to the current hostility towards smoking, smokers frequently expressed anxiety that

b) Referring to the current hostility toward smoking, smokers frequently expressed anxiety about

c)When referring to the current hostility toward smoking, smokers frequently express anxiety about

d) With reference to the current hostility toward smoking, smokers frequently expressed anxiety about

e) Referring to the current hostility toward smoking, smokers frequently express anxiety that
Try this one folks:-

In reference to the current hostility towards smoking, smokers frequently expressed anxiety that their prospects for being hired and promoted are being stunted by their habit.

a) In reference to the current hostility towards smoking, smokers frequently expressed anxiety that

b) Referring to the current hostility toward smoking, smokers frequently expressed anxiety about

c)When referring to the current hostility toward smoking, smokers frequently express anxiety about

d) With reference to the current hostility toward smoking, smokers frequently expressed anxiety about

e) Referring to the current hostility toward smoking, smokers frequently express anxiety that


IMO C.

It is only when referring to smoking somkers express anxiety.

Few more questions,please try them:

Q1.
In 1982 the median income for married-couple families with a wage-earning wife was $9,000 more than a family where the husband only was employed.
(A) a family where the husband only
(B) of a family where only the husband
(C) that for families in which only the husband
(D) a family in which only the husband
(E) those of families in which the husband only

Q2.
Senator Lasker has proposed legislation requiring that employers should retain all older workers indefinitely or show just cause for dismissal.
(A) that employers should retain all older workers
(B) that all older workers be retained by employers
(C) the retaining by employers of all older workers
(D) employers' retention of all older workers
(E) employers to retain all older workers

What do you think of the one below:-

Unlike transplants between identical twins, whose genetic endowment is the same, all patients receiving hearts or other organs must take antirejection drugs for the rest of their lives.
(A) Unlike transplants between identical twins, whose genetic endowment is the same
(B) Besides transplants involving identical twins with the same genetic endowment
(C) Unless the transplant involves identical twins who have the same genetic endowment

(D) Aside from a transplant between identical twins with the same genetic endowment
(E) Other than transplants between identical twins, whose genetic endowment is the same

This is an excellent question, i sure you all will like it.

On the Great Plains, nineteenth-century settlers used mud and grass to build their homes, doing it without timber and nails.
(A) settlers used mud and grass to build their homes, doing it without
(B) settlers used mud and grass to build their homes, did it without
(C) settlers used mud and grass to build their homes, making them while not having
(D) settlers used mud and grass to build their homes, making do without
(E) settlers homes were built of mud and grass, making do without

I would have marked option C

What do you think of the one below:-


Unlike transplants between identical twins, whose genetic endowment is the same, all patients receiving hearts or other organs must take antirejection drugs for the rest of their lives.
(A) Unlike transplants between identical twins, whose genetic endowment is the same
(B) Besides transplants involving identical twins with the same genetic endowment
(C) Unless the transplant involves identical twins who have the same genetic endowment

(D) Aside from a transplant between identical twins with the same genetic endowment
(E) Other than transplants between identical twins, whose genetic endowment is the same

Plz find the answer highlighted below;
Q1. C
Q2. E

Few more questions,please try them:

Q1.
In 1982 the median income for married-couple families with a wage-earning wife was $9,000 more than a family where the husband only was employed.
(A) a family where the husband only
(B) of a family where only the husband
(C) that for families in which only the husband -
comparison between mediam salary is the way to go.
(D) a family in which only the husband
(E) those of families in which the husband only

Q2.
Senator Lasker has proposed legislation requiring that employers should retain all older workers indefinitely or show just cause for dismissal.
(A) that employers should retain all older workers
(B) that all older workers be retained by employers
(C) the retaining by employers of all older workers
(D) employers' retention of all older workers
(E) employers to retain all older workers
Tense is important here, alongwith parallelism

According to Inter study, a nonprofit organization that studies health maintenance organizations (HMO's), they estimate that, in comparison to last year, when only 36 percent of the nation's 607 HMO's was profitable, this year 73 percent will be.

(A) they estimate that, in comparison to last year, when only 36 percent of the nation's 607 HMO's was profitable, this year 73 percent will be.

(B) compared to only 36 percent of the nation's 607 HMO's being profitable last year, they estimate 73 percent would be this year

(C) only 36 percent of the nation's 607 HMO's were profitable last year, it estimates that this year 73 percent will be

(D) it estimates 73 percent of the nation's 607 HMO's would be profitable this year, last year that was only 36 percent

(E) only 36 percent of the nation's 607 HMO's last year were profitable, whereas they estimate it this year to be 73 percent

nuttyvarun Says
I would have marked option C



Correct Answer..."C".
You are right.