GMAT Sentence Correction Discussions

you are right. but what is "it" here? I am confused with the use of "it".

nuttyvarun Says
option A ....

Popular child psychologists have advocated that parents discipline male children similarly to the fashion in which they discipline daughters

a. similarly to the fashion in which they discipline
b. like they would
c. like they discipline
d. as they discipline
e. as they would

got a very basic question guys. please opine.

a. the best way to prepare is to clear up basics rather than to solve tough problems
b. the best way to prepare is to clear up basics rather than solve tough problems


contenxtual.. both can be correct

IDIOM.. "to X rather than Y"..
and
IDIOM.. "to X rather than to Y"

hope that helps πŸ˜‰
Popular child psychologists have advocated that parents discipline male children similarly to the fashion in which they discipline daughters

a. similarly to the fashion in which they discipline
b. like they would
c. like they discipline
d. as they discipline
e. as they would


I would have marked option E

comparing the clauses (phrase with verbs).. so use as instead of like.. so discard option B and C

and lets not assume that daughters are any better that's how we discard option D..

lemme know the OA πŸ˜‰
Popular child psychologists have advocated that parents discipline male children similarly to the fashion in which they discipline daughters

a. similarly to the fashion in which they discipline
b. like they would
c. like they discipline
d. as they discipline
e. as they would


I feel D is the answer.

e misses word discipline .

Building large new hospitals in the bistate area would constitute a wasteful use of resources, on the basis of a voidance of duplicated facilities alone.

a. on the basis of a voidance of duplicated facilities alone
b. on the grounds of avoiding duplicated facilities alone
c. solely in that duplicated facilities should be avoided
d. while the duplication of facilities should be avoided
e. if only because the duplicateion of facilities should be avoided.

Building large new hospitals in the bistate area would constitute a wasteful use of resources, on the basis of a voidance of duplicated facilities alone.

a. on the basis of a voidance of duplicated facilities alone
b. on the grounds of avoiding duplicated facilities alone
c. solely in that duplicated facilities should be avoided
d. while the duplication of facilities should be avoided
e. if only because the duplicateion of facilities should be avoided.


My Take : E.
Please share the explanation

Having the vocal cords being removed in an operation needed because of his amyotrophic lateral sclerosis, Stephen Hawking, the world-renown physicist, communicates by typing his speech into a computer that then speaks the words that he selects on his keyboard.

(A) Having the vocal cords being removed in an operation needed because of his amyotrophic lateral sclerosis
(B) In spite of the vocal cords being removed in an operation needed because of his amyotrophic lateral sclerosis
(C) Because there had been an operation needed because of his amyotrophic lateral sclerosis that lost him his vocal cords
(D) The vocal cords being removed in an operation partly needed because of his amyotrophic lateral sclerosis
(E) His vocal cords removed in an operation partly needed because of his amyotrophic lateral sclerosis


The OA is E ..

Source: Bellcurves
Popular child psychologists have advocated that parents discipline male children similarly to the fashion in which they discipline daughters

a. similarly to the fashion in which they discipline
b. like they would
c. like they discipline
d. as they discipline
e. as they would


My take is D

parallelism ... as instead of like as here 2 phrases are compared.
Building large new hospitals in the bistate area would constitute a wasteful use of resources, on the basis of a voidance of duplicated facilities alone.
a. on the basis of avoidance of duplicated facilities alone
b. on the grounds of avoiding duplicated facilities alone
c. solely in that duplicated facilities should be avoided
d. while the duplication of facilities should be avoided
e. if only because the duplicateion of facilities should be avoided.


C, D, E are out... awkward and wordy construction

B - 'grounds for' is the correct idiom.
siddharthaduggirala Says
Even i go with E. Can plz disclose the source?


@ Sid .. can you provide an explanation.. only u got the right answer

please care to post reasoning with your replies.. the person who posts the question would anyway know the OA, so rather than he confirming the answer and then u replying with reasoning, it wud be best if you post reasoning alongwith your choice... thanks!!

Popular child psychologists have advocated that parents discipline male children similarly to the fashion in which they discipline daughters

a. similarly to the fashion in which they discipline
b. like they would
c. like they discipline
d. as they discipline
e. as they would


IMO E.

A. is clearly incorrect.
B. we are not comparing nouns so incorrect
C.--do--
D.we need auxilary verb would because the "psychologists" are insistent.

Plz post the OA... i'm feeling a bit tacky on this q :lookround:
Please share the explanation

Having the vocal cords being removed in an operation needed because of his amyotrophic lateral sclerosis, Stephen Hawking, the world-renown physicist, communicates by typing his speech into a computer that then speaks the words that he selects on his keyboard.

(A) Having the vocal cords being removed in an operation needed because of his amyotrophic lateral sclerosis
(B) In spite of the vocal cords being removed in an operation needed because of his amyotrophic lateral sclerosis
(C) Because there had been an operation needed because of his amyotrophic lateral sclerosis that lost him his vocal cords
(D) The vocal cods being removed in an operation partly needed because of his amyotrophic lateral sclerosis
(E) His vocal cords removed in an operation partly needed because of his amyotrophic lateral sclerosis


Here is my expl:
A. having + being is not a good combo. Also, if you look at the meaning it sounds like he actually removed the vocal cords...
B.Inspite of requires a subordinate conjunction, a contrast. Also we get a weired meaning that inspite ..... he is still typing.
D. this is a proper clause and we need a modifier.
E. This is just a phrase. Look at "removed in an operation partly needed" does not make any sense.

Only C made some sense to me where we have 1st becasue to explain the typing and the 2nd because or the operation.

Please correct me incase i made a mistake in this expln....
Popular child psychologists have advocated that parents discipline male children similarly to the fashion in which they discipline daughters

a. similarly to the fashion in which they discipline
b. like they would
c. like they discipline
d. as they discipline
e. as they would

as is better than like
parallelism achieved by using discipline
My ans is option D
Popular child psychologists have advocated that parents discipline male children similarly to the fashion in which they discipline daughters

a. similarly to the fashion in which they discipline
b. like they would
c. like they discipline
d. as they discipline
e. as they would


Similar to - analogy..he is similar to his father in scolding...N/A

Like - comparison of nouns, here discussion is making them disciplined...B, C out...

Between D/E..

take out the common part..

parants discipline males as parants discipline daughters
OR
parants discipline males as parants would daugthers..

We are not sure how parants discipline male child exactly so need to have a verb showing the desire/hypotheical situation...

would wins
E)
Building large new hospitals in the bistate area would constitute a wasteful use of resources, on the basis of a voidance of duplicated facilities alone.

a. on the basis of a voidance of duplicated facilities alone
b. on the grounds of avoiding duplicated facilities alone
c. solely in that duplicated facilities should be avoided
d. while the duplication of facilities should be avoided
e. if only because the duplicateion of facilities should be avoided.



A)...

did with meaning...

C/D/E out...should..use suggesting, which is not the case...as sentence is trying to state that...building new are will be wasteful and senetence after comma provide one of the reason..

B...distort the meaning..
Similar to - analogy..he is similar to his father in scolding...N/A

Like - comparison of nouns, here discussion is making them disciplined...B, C out...

Between D/E..

take out the common part..

parants discipline males as parants discipline daughters
OR
parants discipline males as parants would daugthers..

We are not sure how parants discipline male child exactly so need to have a verb showing the desire/hypotheical situation...

would wins
E)


Both of the following are correct sentences
It is urgent that she sign the document.
My advice is that he simply love her for who she is.

If going by your argument we should use



...

We are not sure how parants discipline male child exactly so need to have a verb showing the desire/hypotheical situation...

E)


then 'would' should infact be placed not before 'daughters' but the 'male child'.. which is incorrect for uncertainties

uncertainties: hopes/proposals/request/desires

in these cases we use that + infinitive (without to)

Please share explanations

Not only are the cost of organic produce and the availability of organically grown products increasing each year, but the variety of such organically grown products is increasing as well.

(A) the variety of such organically grown products is increasing as well
(B) also the variety of such organically grown products is increasing as well
(C) the variety of such organically grown products is also increasing
(D) the increase in variety of such organically grown products also
(E) also the increase in variety of such organically grown products

I have some doubts in SC.Can anyone give explanations for these..

1)Fifty milliliters of sodium chloride solution were added in the second step.(Should it be WAS instead of WERE?)

2)Jose's room is so messy that HIS mother calls HIM a pig.
CORRECT:Jose's room is so messy that HIS mother calls Jose a pig.(Why is the change required when the above is fine?)

3)Kathy's suitcase was so stuffed that she decided to pack another one.
CORRECT:Kathy's suitcase was so stuffed that Kathy decided to pack another one.(Why is kathy required again?Can we use pronoun instead of Kathy?)

4)Samantha's face was blurry in the photo,but I could tell she wasn't smiling.
CORRECT:Samantha's face was blurry in the photo,but I could tell Samantha wasn't smiling.(Same as above query)

5)David tried a handful of desserts on the table,which ultimately gave him an upset stomach.
CORRECT: David tried a handful of table's desserts,which ultimately gave him an upset stomach.(Can we use THAT instead of WHICH here?)