GMAT Sentence Correction Discussions

I have some doubts in SC.Can anyone give explanations for these..

1)Fifty milliliters of sodium chloride solution were added in the second step.(Should it be WAS instead of WERE?)

were is correct as the subject is fifty milliliters (fifty is the adj)

2)Jose's room is so messy that HIS mother calls HIM a pig.
CORRECT:Jose's room is so messy that HIS mother calls Jose a pig.(Why is the change required when the above is fine?)

only possesive pronouns can refer to possesive nouns. that leaves no antecedent for 'him'

3)Kathy's suitcase was so stuffed that she decided to pack another one.
CORRECT:Kathy's suitcase was so stuffed that Kathy decided to pack another one.(Why is kathy required again?Can we use pronoun instead of Kathy?)

same as above

4)Samantha's face was blurry in the photo,but I could tell she wasn't smiling.
CORRECT:Samantha's face was blurry in the photo,but I could tell Samantha wasn't smiling.(Same as above query)

same as above

5)David tried a handful of desserts on the table,which ultimately gave him an upset stomach.
CORRECT: David tried a handful of table's desserts,which ultimately gave him an upset stomach.(Can we use THAT instead of WHICH here?)

which incorrectly refers to 'table'

to use 'that' instead of 'which' ..the sentence should be

David tried a handful of table's desserts, and that ultimately gave him an upset stomach.



Please find my comments in red

Thanks 4 the explanations mate!!4 these as well :)

6)We enjoy meeting people having different interests.
CORRECT:We enjoy meeting people who have different interests.(above seemed to be correct 4 me :))

7)The band chosen for the annual spring concert appealed to the student body and the administration as well.
CORRECT:The band chosen for the annual spring concert appealed to both the student body and the administration.(Whats wrong with the question?)

Just like swimming is good exercise,skiing is a great way to burn calories.
CORRECT:Just as swimming is good exercise,skiing is a great way to burn calories.(I have been finding the theory about LIKE Vs AS but unable to figure out the exact difference 😞 )

9)The blue dress looks more flattering on you than the red dress.
CORRECT:The blue dress looks more flattering on you than the red dress does.

10)You are more interesting than she.
CORRECT:You are more interesting than she.

Are the 9th and 10th similar?

Can you please give me some examples where a possessive noun refers to another possessive noun..

Please share explanations

Not only are the cost of organic produce and the availability of organically grown products increasing each year, but the variety of such organically grown products is increasing as well.
(A) the variety of such organically grown products is increasing as well
(B) also the variety of such organically grown products is increasing as well
(C) the variety of such organically grown products is also increasing
(D) the increase in variety of such organically grown products also
(E) also the increase in variety of such organically grown products



Not Only X..But Also Y..

so B/E..

B is parallele as well! hence wins
Please share explanations

Not only are the cost of organic produce and the availability of organically grown products increasing each year, but the variety of such organically grown products is increasing as well.
(A) the variety of such organically grown products is increasing as well
(B) also the variety of such organically grown products is increasing as well
(C) the variety of such organically grown products is also increasing
(D) the increase in variety of such organically grown products also
(E) also the increase in variety of such organically grown products



My take 'A'

B is out because 'also' and 'as well' are redundant
D is out because the sentence is broken
E doesnt logically frame the entire sentence

I was confused between A and C, finally decided on A since it sounds more correct ( 'increasing as well' in A sounds more appropriate than 'also increasing' in B)

Please let me know the answer and whether my approach is correct

the OA is option E

@pj02: exlanation plz..

Building large new hospitals in the bistate area would constitute a wasteful use of resources, on the basis of a voidance of duplicated facilities alone.

a. on the basis of a voidance of duplicated facilities alone
b. on the grounds of avoiding duplicated facilities alone
c. solely in that duplicated facilities should be avoided
d. while the duplication of facilities should be avoided
e. if only because the duplicateion of facilities should be avoided.

pj02 Says
My Take : E.

C, D, E are out... awkward and wordy construction

B - 'grounds for' is the correct idiom.

A)...

did with meaning...

C/D/E out...should..use suggesting, which is not the case...as sentence is trying to state that...building new are will be wasteful and senetence after comma provide one of the reason..

B...distort the meaning..

Both of the following are correct sentences
It is urgent that she sign the document.
My advice is that he simply love her for who she is.

If going by your argument we should use



then 'would' should infact be placed not before 'daughters' but the 'male child'.. which is incorrect for uncertainties

uncertainties: hopes/proposals/request/desires

in these cases we use that + infinitive (without to)

I would mark B.

Building large new hospitals in the bistate area would constitute a wasteful use of resources, on the basis of a voidance of duplicated facilities alone.

a. on the basis of a voidance of duplicated facilities alone
b. on the grounds of avoiding duplicated facilities alone
c. solely in that duplicated facilities should be avoided
d. while the duplication of facilities should be avoided
e. if only because the duplicateion of facilities should be avoided.

IMO C

idiom used here is "not only.. but also" and the sentence needs parallelism.
The catch here is that the pair "not only.. but also" may not necessarily appear as written above but their order must be maintained. For example, in this sentence we can have other words filling in between "but" and "also". As long as we maintain the order of the idiom and parallelism, we are good. Let us know the OA plz.

Please share explanations

Not only are the cost of organic produce and the availability of organically grown products increasing each year, but the variety of such organically grown products is increasing as well.
(A) the variety of such organically grown products is increasing as well
unidiomatic
(B) also the variety of such organically grown products is increasing as well
"as well" makes this choice abhorrent
(C) the variety of such organically grown products is also increasing
(D) the increase in variety of such organically grown products also
parallelism is not maintained
(E) also the increase in variety of such organically grown products
parallelism is not maintained
Please share explanations

Not only are the cost of organic produce and the availability of organically grown products increasing each year, but the variety of such organically grown products is increasing as well.

(A) the variety of such organically grown products is increasing as well
(B) also the variety of such organically grown products is increasing as well
(C) the variety of such organically grown products is also increasing
(D) the increase in variety of such organically grown products also
(E) also the increase in variety of such organically grown products


Hey i answered this question with expln but i cannot see in the website?? :wow::wow::wow:

Any ways i go with C. Rest all are not parallel in the Idiom not only X but also Y.

OA is C ... Bizzare's explanation is spot on

IMO C

idiom used here is "not only.. but also" and the sentence needs parallelism.
The catch here is that the pair "not only.. but also" may not necessarily appear as written above but their order must be maintained. For example, in this sentence we can have other words filling in between "but" and "also". As long as we maintain the order of the idiom and parallelism, we are good. Let us know the OA plz.

Hey i answered this question with expln but i cannot see in the website?? :wow::wow::wow:

Any ways i go with C. Rest all are not parallel in the Idiom not only X but also Y.

OA for below is A

But can someone explain what "it" refers to? also, is it always necessary to have "that" after "inevitable"?

Thanks!

plz explain this:

The ground swell of public opinion made it inevitable that the senate would approve the president's energy proposal
a. it inevitable that the senate would approve
b. inevitable the approval of the senate of
c. the approval of the senate inevitable of

Darth,

Whats the OA for this one?

Please share the explanation

Having the vocal cords being removed in an operation needed because of his amyotrophic lateral sclerosis, Stephen Hawking, the world-renown physicist, communicates by typing his speech into a computer that then speaks the words that he selects on his keyboard.

(A) Having the vocal cords being removed in an operation needed because of his amyotrophic lateral sclerosis
(B) In spite of the vocal cords being removed in an operation needed because of his amyotrophic lateral sclerosis
(C) Because there had been an operation needed because of his amyotrophic lateral sclerosis that lost him his vocal cords
(D) The vocal cords being removed in an operation partly needed because of his amyotrophic lateral sclerosis
(E) His vocal cords removed in an operation partly needed because of his amyotrophic lateral sclerosis

Please share explanations

According to political pundits and government officials, the reason for voting machine breakdowns in many precincts is not so much that voting machines are being used more often in local elections or to fulfill other functions as that the machines are simply outdated and in need of repair or upgrade.

(A) the reason for voting machine breakdowns in many precincts is not so much that voting machines are being used more often in local elections or to fulfill other functions
(B) the reason for voting machine breakdowns in many precincts is not as much their being used more often in local elections or fulfilling other functions as much
(C) it is not so much the reason for voting machine breakdowns in many precincts to be used more often in local elections or to fulfill other functions
(D) it is not so much that the reason for voting machine breakdowns in many precincts is their being used more often in local elections or fulfilling other functions so much
(E) it is not so much the reason for voting machine breakdowns in many precincts that they are being used more often in local elections or fulfilling other functions as much

The OA is E ..

Source: Bellcurves

Darth,

Whats the OA for this one?



The OA is E ... i think i had posted the OA earlier
Please share explanations

According to political pundits and government officials, the reason for voting machine breakdowns in many precincts is not so much that voting machines are being used more often in local elections or to fulfill other functions as that the machines are simply outdated and in need of repair or upgrade.

(A) the reason for voting machine breakdowns in many precincts is not so much that voting machines are being used more often in local elections or to fulfill other functions
(B) the reason for voting machine breakdowns in many precincts is not as much their being used more often in local elections or fulfilling other functions as much
(C) it is not so much the reason for voting machine breakdowns in many precincts to be used more often in local elections or to fulfill other functions
(D) it is not so much that the reason for voting machine breakdowns in many precincts is their being used more often in local elections or fulfilling other functions so much
(E) it is not so much the reason for voting machine breakdowns in many precincts that they are being used more often in local elections or fulfilling other functions as much


"So much as" is an incorrect idiom.

IMO B. Only B uses the correct idiom. OA plz?

IMO A

idiom used: not so much as
Detailed explanation in red.

Please share explanations

According to political pundits and government officials, the reason for voting machine breakdowns in many precincts is not so much that voting machines are being used more often in local elections or to fulfill other functions as that the machines are simply outdated and in need of repair or upgrade.
(A) the reason for voting machine breakdowns in many precincts is not so much that voting machines are being used more often in local elections or to fulfill other functions
we need "that" after reason. "used more often" is parallel to "(used) to fulfill other functions"
(B) the reason for voting machine breakdowns in many precincts is not as much their being used more often in local elections or fulfilling other functions as much
missing "that".
(C) it is not so much the reason for voting machine breakdowns in many precincts to be used more often in local elections or to fulfill other functions
"it" is dangling. unparallel sentence
(D) it is not so much that the reason for voting machine breakdowns in many precincts is their being used more often in local elections or fulfilling other functions so much
"it" is dangling. unparallel sentence
(E) it is not so much the reason for voting machine breakdowns in many precincts that they are being used more often in local elections or fulfilling other functions as much
"it" is dangling.unparallel sentence
Please share explanations

According to political pundits and government officials, the reason for voting machine breakdowns in many precincts is not so much that voting machines are being used more often in local elections or to fulfill other functions as that the machines are simply outdated and in need of repair or upgrade.
(A) the reason for voting machine breakdowns in many precincts is not so much that voting machines are being used more often in local elections or to fulfill other functions
(B) the reason for voting machine breakdowns in many precincts is not as much their being used more often in local elections or fulfilling other functions as much
(C) it is not so much the reason for voting machine breakdowns in many precincts to be used more often in local elections or to fulfill other functions
(D) it is not so much that the reason for voting machine breakdowns in many precincts is their being used more often in local elections or fulfilling other functions so much
(E) it is not so much the reason for voting machine breakdowns in many precincts that they are being used more often in local elections or fulfilling other functions as much



so X "that" as THAT

so Adjective AS action/"verb to be"

between->A/D..

D--"their being"...awkwerd and wordy..

(A) ...
"So much as" is an incorrect idiom.

IMO B. Only B uses the correct idiom. OA plz?


who said so?

so much as
1. meaning: but rather
-> I'm not looking at her so much as I am studying her hat.
2. meaning: even
-> From outside, no one could see so much as a light on in the house.

adv.
Used as an intensive to indicate something unexpected; even: He wouldn't so much as look at me.
who said so?

so much as
1. meaning: but rather
-> I'm not looking at her so much as I am studying her hat.
2. meaning: even
-> From outside, no one could see so much as a light on in the house.
adv.
Used as an intensive to indicate something unexpected; even: He wouldn't so much as look at me.


HMm.. i see the source you got these examples from.

any ways i will dig into this...
then there is a bigger Question?

"It is very likely that there will be rain today"???

IS this sentence can't stand alone? / is "IT" here is dangling?

I am not sure whether 'it is unlikely' is justified in this sentence because here it can cause a pronoun reference error... I discarded the option on the basis of 'to be' form as one error is enough to discard an option :)

on a more general note.. i think a sentence is correct if it says

"It is likely that the economy will rise" ..but is kind of wordy.. we could say "the economy is likely to rise"


Hi - wanted to share a point regarding the expletives "it and "there" related to the above discussion.

It & There are not preferred in the beginning of a sentence because both are expletives, which are words that have no referents. Expletives does not make a sentence wrong. It is very similar to the use of being on the GMAT. Being is not preferred but it is correct in some cases.

Therefore, don't avoid a sentence simply because it has a syntactic expletive. Discard the expletives only if there is a better answer choice.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Expletive# ... expletives


Syntactic expletives are words that perform a syntactic role but contribute nothing to meaning. Expletive subjects are part of the grammar of many non-pro-drop languages such as English, whose clauses normally require overt provision of subject even when the subject can be pragmatically inferred (for an alternative theory considering expletives like there as a dummy predicates rather than a dummy subject based on the analysis of the copula see Moro 1997 in the list of references cited here). Consider this example:

"It is important that you work hard for the exam."

Following the eighteenth-century conception of pronoun, Bishop Robert Lowth objected that since it is a pronoun, it should have an antecedent. Since it cannot function like that in Latin, Lowth said that the usage was incorrect in English.

Whether or not it is a pronoun here (and linguists today would say that it is one), English is not Latin; and the sentence was and is fully acceptable to native speakers of English and thus was and is grammatical. It has no meaning here; it merely serves as a dummy subject. (It is sometimes called preparatory it or prep it, or a dummy pronoun.)

It is worth noting that Bishop Lowth did not condemn sentences that use there as an expletive, even though it is one in for example:

"There are ten desks here."

The nomenclature used for the constituents of sentences such as this is still a matter of some dispute, but there might be called subject, are copula, and ten desks predicate nominal. Meanwhile here is an adverbial phrase that conveniently reveals the semantic vacuity of there in this example.

There is some disagreement over whether the it in such sentences as

"It is raining now."

are expletives. Whereas it makes no sense to ask what the it refers to in "It is important that you work hard for the exam", some people might say that the dummy it in "It is raining now" refers to the weather (even if the word weather has not previously been mentioned). Thus the it in such sentences is sometimes called expletive, sometimes a weather "it". Compare with weather verb.





Hope this info helps some of you.