GMAT Sentence Correction Discussions

some or the other person has got both the explanation and the answer correct.. in case anyone has any doubts, just scroll up to read through previous posts

Although films about the American West depict coyotes as solitary animals howling mournfully on the tops of distant hills, in reality these gregarious creatures live in stable groups that occupy the same territory for long periods.

(A) films about the American West depict coyotes as solitary animals howling mournfully on the tops of distant hills
(B) in films about the American West coyotes are depicted to be solitary animals that howl mournfully on the tops of distant hills
(C) coyotes are depicted as solitary animals howling mournfully on the tops of distant hills in films about the American West
(D) films about the American West depict coyotes as if they were solitary, mournfully howling animals on the tops of distant hills
(E) films about the American West depict coyotes to be solitary and mournfully howling animals on the tops of distant hills

plz share your thoughts..


OA is option A
this one is interesting as well ;)

Although all the proceedings of the Communist party conference held in Moscow were not carried live, Soviet audiences have seen a great deal of coverage.
(A) all the proceedings of the Communist party conference held in Moscow were not carried live
(B) all the Communist party conferences Moscow proceedings were not carried live
(C) all the Communist party conference Moscow proceedings have not been carried alive
(D) not all the Communist party conference Moscow proceedings have been carried alive
(E) not all the proceedings of the Communist party conference held in Moscow were carried live


OA is option E
B and C are not right ( I think improper construction) don't know the exact rules for eliminating.

Between D and E, D ends with alive, giving a different meaning, so answer is E.
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Although films about the American West depict coyotes as solitary animals howling mournfully on the tops of distant hills, in reality these gregarious creatures live in stable groups that occupy the same territory for long periods.

(A) films about the American West depict coyotes as solitary animals howling mournfully on the tops of distant hills
(B) in films about the American West coyotes are depicted to be solitary animals that howl mournfully on the tops of distant hills
(C) coyotes are depicted as solitary animals howling mournfully on the tops of distant hills in films about the American West
(D) films about the American West depict coyotes as if they were solitary, mournfully howling animals on the tops of distant hills
(E) films about the American West depict coyotes to be solitary and mournfully howling animals on the tops of distant hills
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Here B and C conveys that the animals are depicted(past tense), so we can eliminate.

D conveys "as if", which alters the meaning.

E should be correct

PS: I am new to this thread, Can i know what does OA,IMO expand to?


the problem with E is "solitary and mournfully howling". and represents parallelism so solitary is an adjective and mournfully is an adverb modifying adjective howling. So they are not parallel. SO E cannot be correct answer. Puys... Any explantion???
some or the other person has got both the explanation and the answer correct.. in case anyone has any doubts, just scroll up to read through previous posts



OA is option A



OA is option E



Can some body explain why A is wrong for second question... only the placement of not is different in both A and E
aju007 Says
Can some body explain why A is wrong for second question... only the placement of not is different in both A and E

Here the original sentence means despite none of the proceedings were carried live, people saw most of them. this is a illogical meaning and the placement of not must be changed.

Hence E.


Notice the highlighted section/words below;

Now if I ask u to fill in the blank space,
Although ______________ Soviet audiences have seen a great deal of coverage.
you would know that Soviet audiences have seen great deal of coverage.. somthing like "more than they would have expected"

Option A:
all the proceedings of the Communist party conference held in Moscow were not carried live
- If ALL was NOT carried live.. then how is the second part in the sentence possible. the entire meaning is changes thanks to this answer option.

Option E:
not all the proceedings of the Communist party conference held in Moscow were carried live
- this means that though it was problematic..blah blah blah.. then second part of the sentence..

Does that help!! ;)

aju007 Says
Can some body explain why A is wrong for second question... only the placement of not is different in both A and E

this one is interesting as well ;)

Although all the proceedings of the Communist party conference held in Moscow were not carried live, Soviet audiences have seen a great deal of coverage.
(A) all the proceedings of the Communist party conference held in Moscow were not carried live
(B) all the Communist party conferences Moscow proceedings were not carried live
(C) all the Communist party conference Moscow proceedings have not been carried alive
(D) not all the Communist party conference Moscow proceedings have been carried alive
(E) not all the proceedings of the Communist party conference held in Moscow were carried live

Poor weather in early 14th-century Europe created meager harvests, causing the result of mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as many as 15 percent of the population.

  1. causing the result of mass starvation in some areas and the elimination as many as
  2. causing the result of mass starvation in some areas and eliminating as much as
  3. resulting in mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as much as
  4. and resulted in mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as many as
  5. causing mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as many as
Poor weather in early 14th-century Europe created meager harvests, causing the result of mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as many as 15 percent of the population.

  1. causing the result of mass starvation in some areas and the elimination as many as
  2. causing the result of mass starvation in some areas and eliminating as much as
  3. resulting in mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as much as
  4. and resulted in mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as many as
  5. causing mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as many as



I will go with 3,

Causing and result are the same. so 1, 2 are incorrect.4 uses "and" and therefore the second clause cannot act as a modifier.

in 5 the "as many as" is used. as many as is used to indicate a definite quantity but in this case we dont know the exact number so as much as is correct.

What is the OA?
Poor weather in early 14th-century Europe created meager harvests, causing the result of mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as many as 15 percent of the population.

  1. causing the result of mass starvation in some areas and the elimination as many as
  2. causing the result of mass starvation in some areas and eliminating as much as
  3. resulting in mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as much as
  4. and resulted in mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as many as
  5. causing mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as many as



IMO: Ans is ...3
...as many as...is wrong as percentage is singular. So 1,4,5 are wrong
...causing the result...is redundant. So 2 is wrong.
Poor weather in early 14th-century Europe created meager harvests, causing the result of mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as many as 15 percent of the population.

  1. causing the result of mass starvation in some areas and the elimination as many as
  2. causing the result of mass starvation in some areas and eliminating as much as
  3. resulting in mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as much as
  4. and resulted in mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as many as
  5. causing mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as many as

3 is definately the answer.1/2 are redundant.and in 4 states poor weather is responsible and in 5 the parrallel structure of the two parts not synchronised.
Although films about the American West depict coyotes as solitary animals howling mournfully on the tops of distant hills, in reality these gregarious creatures live in stable groups that occupy the same territory for long periods.

(A) films about the American West depict coyotes as solitary animals howling mournfully on the tops of distant hills
(B) in films about the American West coyotes are depicted to be solitary animals that howl mournfully on the tops of distant hills
(C) coyotes are depicted as solitary animals howling mournfully on the tops of distant hills in films about the American West
(D) films about the American West depict coyotes as if they were solitary, mournfully howling animals on the tops of distant hills
(E) films about the American West depict coyotes to be solitary and mournfully howling animals on the tops of distant hills

plz share your thoughts..


can anyone tells me whatz the meaning of-films about the American West depict coyotes .

I have choosen C as the answer.
Poor weather in early 14th-century Europe created meager harvests, causing the result of mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as many as 15 percent of the population.

  1. causing the result of mass starvation in some areas and the elimination as many as
  2. causing the result of mass starvation in some areas and eliminating as much as
  3. resulting in mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as much as
  4. and resulted in mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as many as
  5. causing mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as many as



i go with 3
can anyone tells me whatz the meaning of-films about the American West depict coyotes .

I have choosen C as the answer.


depict as is the correct idiomatic expression..
Poor weather in early 14th-century Europe created meager harvests, causing the result of mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as many as 15 percent of the population.

  1. causing the result of mass starvation in some areas and the elimination as many as
  2. causing the result of mass starvation in some areas and eliminating as much as
  3. resulting in mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as much as
  4. and resulted in mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as many as
  5. causing mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as many as

  1. awkward. Causing the result of .causing the result is also redundant. It can be simply said as which resulted in .
  2. same as 1.
  3. seems to be correct
  4. altered intent. The meaning is changed.
  5. causing is the wrong wordit should be resulting.

I will go with 3. What is the OA.
Poor weather in early 14th-century Europe created meager harvests, causing the result of mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as many as 15 percent of the population.

  1. causing the result of mass starvation in some areas and the elimination as many as
  2. causing the result of mass starvation in some areas and eliminating as much as
  3. resulting in mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as much as
  4. and resulted in mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as many as
  5. causing mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as many as

Is "5" the ans?

Its "3"

Reason: Population is uncountable. So as many as" is wrong here n instead of that " as much as" shd come.

Poor weather in early 14th-century Europe created meager harvests, causing the result of mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as many as 15 percent of the population.

  1. causing the result of mass starvation in some areas and the elimination as many as
  2. causing the result of mass starvation in some areas and eliminating as much as
  3. resulting in mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as much as
  4. and resulted in mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as many as
  5. causing mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as many as


1,4,5 can be eliminated on the grounds of using as many as 15% population. it shud be 'as much as'

between 2,3
2 is parallel.
3 is awkward.

hence ans :2


Although films about the American West depict coyotes as solitary animals howling mournfully on the tops of distant hills, in reality these gregarious creatures live in stable groups that occupy the same territory for long periods.

(A) films about the American West depict coyotes as solitary animals howling mournfully on the tops of distant hills
(B) in films about the American West coyotes are depicted to be solitary animals that howl mournfully on the tops of distant hills
(C) coyotes are depicted as solitary animals howling mournfully on the tops of distant hills in films about the American West
(D) films about the American West depict coyotes as if they were solitary, mournfully howling animals on the tops of distant hills
(E) films about the American West depict coyotes to be solitary and mournfully howling animals on the tops of distant hills
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Here B and C conveys that the animals are depicted(past tense), so we can eliminate.

D conveys "as if", which alters the meaning.

E should be correct

PS: I am new to this thread, Can i know what does OA,IMO expand to?


OA - official ans.
IMO -- in my opinion.

eliminate B, E for using wrong idiom , 'dipict to be'.
correct usage : 'dipict as'

Eliminate D:Wrong usage of conditional clause : IF


Between A, C

A makes comparison, and c doesnot.
But from original statement we can make out that it is abt comparison of depiction of cayotes in films and in reality.

A wins.
ANS : A
Notice the highlighted section/words below;

Now if I ask u to fill in the blank space,
Although ______________ Soviet audiences have seen a great deal of coverage.
you would know that Soviet audiences have seen great deal of coverage.. somthing like "more than they would have expected"

Option A:
all the proceedings of the Communist party conference held in Moscow were not carried live
- If ALL was NOT carried live.. then how is the second part in the sentence possible. the entire meaning is changes thanks to this answer option.

Option E:
not all the proceedings of the Communist party conference held in Moscow were carried live
- this means that though it was problematic..blah blah blah.. then second part of the sentence..

Does that help!! ;)



nice one dude!

Hi Puys,

Good to see that discussion is quite alive, Here i've some more to wrack the head:cheerio::
A study commissioned by the Department of Agriculture showed that if calves exercise and associated with other calves, they will require less medication and gain weight quicker than do those raised in confinement.
(A) associated with other calves, they will require less medication and gain weight quicker than do
(B) associated with other calves, they require less medication and gain weight quicker than
(C) associate with other calves, they required less medication and will gain weight quicker than do
(D) associate with other calves, they have required less medication and will gain weight more quickly than do
(E) associate with other calves, they require less medication and gain weight more quickly than

"P.S. - I got it wrong for a very specific reason, want to know the exaact reasoning. BTW...Let's try first"


Critics of the trend toward privately operated prisons consider corrections facilities to be an integral part of the criminal justice system and question if profits should be made from incarceration.
(A) to be an integral part of the criminal justice system and question if
(B) as an integral part of the criminal justice system and they question if
(C) as being an integral part of the criminal justice system and question whether
(D) an integral part of the criminal justice system and question whether
(E) are an integral part of the criminal justice system, and they question whether

Several years ago the diet industry introduced a variety of appetite suppressants, but some of these drugs caused stomach disorders severe enough to have them banned by the Food and Drug Administration.
(A) stomach disorders severe enough to have them
(B) stomach disorders that were severe enough so they were
(C) stomach disorders of such severity so as to be
(D) such severe stomach disorders that they were
(E) such severe stomach disorders as to be

Some analysts contend that true capitalism exists only when the ownership of both property and the means of production is regarded as an inalienable right of an individual's, and it is not a license granted by government and revokable at whim.
(A) is regarded as an inalienable right of an individual's, and it is not
(B) are regarded as individuals' inalienable rights, and that it not be
(C) is regarded as an individual's inalienable right, not as
(D) are regarded as an individual's inalienable rights, not when they are
(E) is regarded as the inalienable rights of an individual, not when it is
Cheers....happy correcting...

Poor weather in early 14th-century Europe created meager harvests, causing the result of mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as many as 15 percent of the population.

  1. causing the result of mass starvation in some areas and the elimination as many as
  2. causing the result of mass starvation in some areas and eliminating as much as
  3. resulting in mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as much as
  4. and resulted in mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as many as
  5. causing mass starvation in some areas and the elimination of as many as


As Much As is the correct usage and not As Many As ...Rule: try adding a number ...1, 2 and see if it make sense...Population + 1 = , doesn't make sense..
1, 3, 5 are gone...
resulting in "Mass starvation ..blah blah...(NOUN) AND Elimination (Noun)..

parallel, 3 wins...

cheers