GMAT Sentence Correction Discussions

again idiom.. to me there is only one sentence with a proper idiom, and I shall go with the same.. "as great as.."

I would have marked option D

wat is the OA??


E is right answer for sure...Home, Plane & Road...

SO X As Y

So pink as rose..
Try some new ones:

Despite protests from some waste-disposal companies, state health officials have ordered the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches to be measured and that the results be published.
(A) the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches to be measured and that the results be
(B) that seawater at popular beaches should be measured for their levels of bacteria, with the results being.
(C) the measure of levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches and the results to be
(D) seawater measured at popular beaches for levels of bacteria, with their results
(E) that the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches be measured and the results.
By a vote of 9 to 0, the Supreme Court awarded the Central Intelligence Agency broad discretionary powers enabling it to withhold from the public the identities of its sources of intelligence information.
(A) enabling it to withhold from the public
(B) for it to withhold from the public
(C) for withholding disclosure to the public of
(D) that enable them to withhold from public disclosure
(E) that they can withhold public disclosure of
The physical structure of the human eye enables it to sense light of wavelengths up to 0.0005 millimeters; infrared radiation, however, is invisible because its wavelength0.1 millimetersis too long to be registered by the eye.
(A) infrared radiation, however, is invisible because its wavelength0.1 millimetersis too long to be registered by the eye
(B) however, the wavelength of infrared radiation0.1 millimetersis too long to be registered by the eye making it invisible
(C) infrared radiation, however, is invisible because its wavelength0.1 millimetersis too long for the eye to register it
(D) however, because the wavelength of infrared radiation is 0.1 millimeters, it is too long for the eye to register and thus invisible
(E) however, infrared radiation has a wavelength of 0.1 millimeters that is too long for the eye to
register, thus making it invisible
Please post the explaination with the answers....
Cheers


Sorry for being late...Here are the OA:
1- E
2- A
3- A
Try some new ones:

Despite protests from some waste-disposal companies, state health officials have ordered the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches to be measured and that the results be published.
(A) the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches to be measured and that the results be
wrong - need 'Order that'
(B) that seawater at popular beaches should be measured for their levels of bacteria, with the results being.
wrong - 'Order that' is subjunctive .. no need os 'should'
other indication 'being' is wrong.
(C) the measure of levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches and the results to be
wrong - need 'Order that'
(D) seawater measured at popular beaches for levels of bacteria, with their results
wrong - need 'Order that'
(E) that the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches be measured and the results.
correct . expressed in subjunctive mood
By a vote of 9 to 0, the Supreme Court awarded the Central Intelligence Agency broad discretionary powers enabling it to withhold from the public the identities of its sources of intelligence information.
(A) enabling it to withhold from the public
correct --present participle
(B) for it to withhold from the public
need present participle, , 'for it' is wrong
(C) for withholding disclosure to the public of
need present participle, also sentence is awkward
(D) that enable them to withhold from public disclosure
need present participle , 'them' is wrong
(E) that they can withhold public disclosure of
need present participle, 'they' is wrong
The physical structure of the human eye enables it to sense light of wavelengths up to 0.0005 millimeters; infrared radiation, however, is invisible because its wavelength0.1 millimetersis too long to be registered by the eye.
(A) infrared radiation, however, is invisible because its wavelength0.1 millimetersis too long to be registered by the eye
passive
(B) however, the wavelength of infrared radiation0.1 millimetersis too long to be registered by the eye making it invisible
passive
(C) infrared radiation, however, is invisible because its wavelength0.1 millimetersis too long for the eye to register it
correct
(D) however, because the wavelength of infrared radiation is 0.1 millimeters, it is too long for the eye to register and thus invisible
lengthy
(E) however, infrared radiation has a wavelength of 0.1 millimeters that is too long for the eye to register, thus making it invisible
lengthy
Please post the explaination with the answers....
Cheers


my exp in red
rgds-
sri
Dig this;

Constructed with the finest Italian marble, the floor of the church is its greatest attraction and is more attractive to tourists than are its ornate stained-glass windows.

A. attraction and is more attractive to tourists than are its ornate stained-glass windows.
wrong construction-- 'is' refers to floor of the church but , 'it' in 'its orante glass windows' should refer to church.
B. attraction, itself more attractive to tourists than are its ornate stained-glass windows.
correct : church and church's windows are compared

C. attraction, itself more attractive to tourists as are its ornate stained-glass windows.
wrong - more --as
D. attraction, being more attractive to tourists than its ornate stained-glass windows.
wrong - being
E. attraction as it more is attractive to tourists than are the churchs stained-glass windows.
wrong - church and church's windows are compared



my ans in red
ans : B

Rgds-
sri
does the option E read as :
E. attraction as it is more attractive to tourists than are the churchs stained-glass windows. ??
as gmat is not expected to provide such easily detectable errors.

In this case I'll go with E as in rest of the cases it is not clear to which 'its' refers to. 'floor' or the 'church'

My question :

It is as difficult to prevent crimes against property as those that are against a person.
(A) those that are against a
(B) those against a
(C) it is against a
(D) preventing those against a
(E) it is to prevent those against a


Ans to you question
is E.

EXp:
compared difficulty level to prevent crimes is compared.
A. difficulty level of crimes is compard with crimes themsleves
B. same as A.
C. incomplete ,
D. ing from. not parallel
need help in this....

Few people realize that the chance of accidental injury or death may be as great or greater in the safety of their own homes than in a plane or on the road.
(A) may be as great or greater in the safety of their own homes than
wriong : as great as or greater than is correct usage.
(B) is at least as great or greater in the safety of their own homes than
wriong : as great as or greater than is correct usage.
(C) might be so great or greater in the safety of their own home as
wriong : as great as or greater than is correct usage.
(D) may be at least as great in the safety of their own homes as
correct
(E) can be at least so great in the safety of their own home as
wriong : atleast so.. as


as ... as or (-er) than is idom.
can also be written using .. atleast as .. as

rgds-
sri

Few people realize that the chance of accidental injury or death may be as great or greater in the safety of their own homes than in a plane or on the road.
(A) may be as great or greater in the safety of their own homes than
(B) is at least as great or greater in the safety of their own homes than
(C) might be so great or greater in the safety of their own home as
(D) may be at least as great in the safety of their own homes as
(E) can be at least so great in the safety of their own home as



Originally Posted by nuttyvarun View Post
again idiom.. to me there is only one sentence with a proper idiom, and I shall go with the same.. "as great as.."

I would have marked option D

wat is the OA??



Originally Posted by amitrv007 View Post
they ve given answer as E but that looks very wierd...one more thing ive been solving these questions from sources on the net. should i look for more questions like these or should i stick with standard sources like OG,kaplan,manhattan etc.?

well.. my bad.. there is another valid idiom, i.e. so great as..

"homes" is incorrect in option D.. it should be indeed option E..thanks for pointing it out.. ;)

For me E is awkward

Few people realize that the chance of accidental injury or death
can be at least so great in the safety of their own home as
in a plane or on the road.

it means all face injury in one home , if it is true.

and i doubt atleast so ..as is diom
so .. as is probably.

rgds-
sri
The computer software being designed for a project studying Native American access to higher education will not only meet the needs of that study, but also has the versatility and power of facilitating similar research endeavors.

(A) but also has the versatility and power of facilitating
(B) but also have the versatility and power to facilitate
(C) but it also has the versatility and power to facilitate
(D) and also have the versatility and power of facilitating
(E) and it also has such versatility and power that it can facilitate

Puys please help me in solving this question.Please provide your explanation.

The greater the bandwidth requirements of an aplication, the higher speed network link you need to get adequate performance.
A. The greater the bandwidth requirements of an aplication, the higher speed network link you need to get adequate performance.
B. The greater the bandwidth requirements of an application, the speed of the network link you need to get adequate performance must be higher.
C. The grater the bandwidth requirements of an application ,the highest speed network link you need to get adequate performance.
D. As the bandwidth requirements of an application becomes greater , the higher speed network link you need to get adequate performance.
E. As the bandwidth requirements of an application becomes greater, the speed of network link you need to get adequate performance becomes higher.

The computer software being designed for a project studying Native American access to higher education will not only meet the needs of that study, but also has the versatility and power of facilitating similar research endeavors.


Option B...
The computer software being designed for a project studying Native American access to higher education will not only meet the needs of that study, but also has the versatility and power of facilitating similar research endeavors.
(A) but also has the versatility and power of facilitating
(B) but also have the versatility and power to facilitate
(C) but it also has the versatility and power to facilitate
(D) and also have the versatility and power of facilitating
(E) and it also has such versatility and power that it can facilitate


My answer-Option C

not only... but also (correct usage of idiom).

Power to . is correct usage not power of

I would have marked option E.. wats the OA??

Puys please help me in solving this question.Please provide your explanation.

The greater the bandwidth requirements of an aplication, the higher speed network link you need to get adequate performance.
A. The greater the bandwidth requirements of an aplication, the higher speed network link you need to get adequate performance.
B. The greater the bandwidth requirements of an application, the speed of the network link you need to get adequate performance must be higher.
C. The grater the bandwidth requirements of an application ,the highest speed network link you need to get adequate performance.
D. As the bandwidth requirements of an application becomes greater , the higher speed network link you need to get adequate performance.
E. As the bandwidth requirements of an application becomes greater, the speed of network link you need to get adequate performance becomes higher.

Thanks for the answers!
Could you please explain why 'have' but not 'has'? computer software is singular. I thought option C has correct usage (has).

Puys please help me in solving this question.Please provide your explanation.

The greater the bandwidth requirements of an aplication, the higher speed network link you need to get adequate performance.


The sentence is perfect as it is. I dont find an error.

Option A...
The computer software being designed for a project studying Native American access to higher education will not only meet the needs of that study, but also has the versatility and power of facilitating similar research endeavors.
(A) but also has the versatility and power of facilitating
(B) but also have the versatility and power to facilitate
(C) but it also has the versatility and power to facilitate
(D) and also have the versatility and power of facilitating
(E) and it also has such versatility and power that it can facilitate


has to be singular.. so option B and D are omitted (they both use "have").. option E is wordy..

between option A and option C, I would have marked option C for the tense and use of word "it".

wat is the OA??
The greater the bandwidth requirements of an aplication, the higher speed network link you need to get adequate performance.
A. The greater the bandwidth requirements of an aplication, the higher speed network link you need to get adequate performance.
B. The greater the bandwidth requirements of an application, the speed of the network link you need to get adequate performance must be higher.
C. The grater the bandwidth requirements of an application ,the highest speed network link you need to get adequate performance.
D. As the bandwidth requirements of an application becomes greater , the higher speed network link you need to get adequate performance.
E. As the bandwidth requirements of an application becomes greater, the speed of network link you need to get adequate performance becomes higher.
OA is A
@Varun and @friend9921--can you please explain your answer choice?

In addition to it , I have also picked option E as answer, the reason being parallelism.
Please correct me where I am going wrong as in the book detailed explanation is not given.
The computer software being designed for a project studying Native American access to higher education will not only meet the needs of that study, but also has the versatility and power of facilitating similar research endeavors.
(A) but also has the versatility and power of facilitating
(B) but also have the versatility and power to facilitate
(C) but it also has the versatility and power to facilitate
(D) and also have the versatility and power of facilitating
(E) and it also has such versatility and power that it can facilitate

A is the correct answer.The noun phrase requires singular verbs-has.
the comparision is-needs of the study ...versatilityand power of....is right
The greater the bandwidth requirements of an aplication, the higher speed network link you need to get adequate performance.
A. The greater the bandwidth requirements of an aplication, the higher speed network link you need to get adequate performance.
B. The greater the bandwidth requirements of an application, the speed of the network link you need to get adequate performance must be higher.
C. The grater the bandwidth requirements of an application ,the highest speed network link you need to get adequate performance.
D. As the bandwidth requirements of an application becomes greater , the higher speed network link you need to get adequate performance.
E. As the bandwidth requirements of an application becomes greater, the speed of network link you need to get adequate performance becomes higher.
OA is A
@Varun and @friend9921--can you please explain your answer choice?
In addition to it , I have also picked option E as answer, the reason being parallelism.
Please correct me where I am going wrong as in the book detailed explanation is not given.


the answer is straight away A.No second thoughts.idiom is-the more x ....the more y.both parts must be in the same degree to show the right comparision.
As is used to show clause comparision or to give examples.in the sentences no such intentions are comprehended
A is the correct answer.The noun phrase requires singular verbs-has.
the comparision is-needs of the study ...versatilityand power of....is right

@GwG
the correct usage is power to X and not power of X ( which is used in mathematics)

I believe that in this case the answer will be C.

I have also missed the subject-verb agreement while posting the answer.
@GwG
the correct usage is power to X and not power of X ( which is used in mathematics)

I believe that in this case the answer will be C.

I have also missed the subject-verb agreement while posting the answer.


no it depends on the context.both are correct.for e:g
the devastating power of nuclear arsenal,power of social discrimination etc