GMAT Sentence Correction Discussions

Puys,

Just now we solved the question involving the usage of semicolon and colon.{posted by ponds_ggn }

Question: After the company recalled one of its best-selling products, it would be forced to accept a one billion dollar loss, an expense that would have forced its main competitor to declare bankruptcy if it had suffered such a loss.
(A)After the company recalled one of its best-selling products, it would be forced to accept a one billion dollar loss, an expense that would have forced its main competitor to declare bankruptcy if it had suffered such a loss.
(B)As the company recalled one of its best-selling products, it accepted a one billion dollar loss; forcing its main competitor to declare bankruptcy if it had suffered such a loss.
(C)After the company recalled one of its best-selling products, its one billion dollar loss would have to be accepted; such a loss would have forced its main competitor to declare bankruptcy.
(D)After the company recalled one of its best-selling products, it was forced to accept a one billion dollar loss; its main competitor would have been forced to declare bankruptcy if it had suffered such a loss.
(E)When the company recalled one of its best-selling products, a one billion dollar loss it was forced to accept, an expense that would have forced its main competitor into bankruptcy.

I came across an article,explaining the usage of semicolon and colon, posted on internet.
I thought of sharing it with you.


The semicolon is a simple piece of punctuation, much easier to work with than the comma because it follows fairly clear rules. If you learn the two simple rules explained here, you'll rarely go wrong. It has two main uses, which are both easy to identify. You use it to connect two independent clauses together into one sentence, and you use it as a super-comma. You can use it in a few other unusual situations, but they come up rarely, and there are other ways to handle those situations. Learn them if you want to be perfect, but if you learn to recognize the two primary uses, you will do fine as semicolon user.


To Connect Two Independent Clauses

Independent clauses are series of words that could stand alone as complete sentences. When you have two otherwise complete sentences that you want to connect to form one long sentence, use a semicolon between them.

Example: This could be a complete sentence; this could be another one.

If you put a comma where that semicolon is, you will have committed a "comma splice," which is a very nasty grammar error indeed. Sometimes, the second clause doesn't really look like a complete sentence, so you must watch closely.

Example: Twelve workers started the project; only five remain.

There is, however, one exception that can cause you a problem. You don't use a semicolon to connect two complete sentences if there's a conjunction between the clauses (and, but, etc.). In that case, use a comma.

Example: This could be a complete sentence, and this could be another one.

Adding that single word, the conjunction "and," means that you must change that semicolon into a comma.


To Serve as a Super-comma

When you have a series of three or more items that normally would be separated by commas except that each individual item already has a comma in it, you use the semicolon between items.

Example: We visited Pago Pago, Western Samoa; Curitiba, Brazil; and St. George, Utah.

Example: The trio's birthdays are November 10, 1946; December 7, 1947; and October 31, 1950.

Example: Her favorite players are Steve Young, a quarterback; Jason Buck, a defensive end; and Ty Detmer, another quarterback.
As in the examples above, citing places, dates, and people's names with descriptions, are three very common situations where you'll see the super-comma usage.

hi I am planning to give gmat in sept and i have hard doing sentence Correction question , please help .Also i wanted to know i have that 1000 SC's questions but dunt have a solution to it .So can you please tell me from whr to get that

Hi Vyomb,

Thanks a million !
Very useful and will go long way in clearing this obstacle.

Awesome Buddy !

Cheers !:cheers:


Puys,

Just now we solved the question involving the usage of semicolon and colon.{posted by ponds_ggn }

I came across an article,explaining the usage of semicolon and colon, posted on internet.
I thought of sharing it with you.


The semicolon is a simple piece of punctuation, much easier to work with than the comma because it follows fairly clear rules. If you learn the two simple rules explained here, you'll rarely go wrong. It has two main uses, which are both easy to identify. You use it to connect two independent clauses together into one sentence, and you use it as a super-comma. You can use it in a few other unusual situations, but they come up rarely, and there are other ways to handle those situations. Learn them if you want to be perfect, but if you learn to recognize the two primary uses, you will do fine as semicolon user.


To Connect Two Independent Clauses

Independent clauses are series of words that could stand alone as complete sentences. When you have two otherwise complete sentences that you want to connect to form one long sentence, use a semicolon between them.

Example: This could be a complete sentence; this could be another one.

If you put a comma where that semicolon is, you will have committed a "comma splice," which is a very nasty grammar error indeed. Sometimes, the second clause doesn't really look like a complete sentence, so you must watch closely.

Example: Twelve workers started the project; only five remain.

There is, however, one exception that can cause you a problem. You don't use a semicolon to connect two complete sentences if there's a conjunction between the clauses (and, but, etc.). In that case, use a comma.

Example: This could be a complete sentence, and this could be another one.

Adding that single word, the conjunction "and," means that you must change that semicolon into a comma.


To Serve as a Super-comma

When you have a series of three or more items that normally would be separated by commas except that each individual item already has a comma in it, you use the semicolon between items.

Example: We visited Pago Pago, Western Samoa; Curitiba, Brazil; and St. George, Utah.

Example: The trio's birthdays are November 10, 1946; December 7, 1947; and October 31, 1950.

Example: Her favorite players are Steve Young, a quarterback; Jason Buck, a defensive end; and Ty Detmer, another quarterback.
As in the examples above, citing places, dates, and people's names with descriptions, are three very common situations where you'll see the super-comma usage.

Question:The architect proposed that supplies for the new wing of the hospital, which hospital administrators hoped to open by the end of the year, will be procured from local providers.
(A)that supplies for the new wing of the hospital, which hospital administrators hoped to open by the end of the year, will be
--subjunctive mood : using will be wrong .
(B)that supplies for the hospital's new wing, which hospital administrators hope to be opened by the end of the year, be
-- satisfies subjunctive mood rule but hope to be opened is wrong usage.
(C)that the hospital's new wing's supplies, which hospital administrators hope to be opened by year's end, might be
-- using might be is wrong usage in case of subjunctive mood
(D)that supplies for the new wing of the hospital, which hospital administrators hope to be open by the end of the year, were
-- were is wrong
(E) that supplies for the hospital's new wing, which hospital administrators hope to open by the end of the year, be
correct.
proposed that supplies be .. is correct


question of subjunctive mood.
exp n ans in red.

rgds-
sri
Hi Guys,

Try these:

Question: In a seminar paper delivered at the annual American Psychological Association conference, Dr. Spagnoli distinguished pronounced alterations in mood, which may be frequent and occasionally severe without their constituting a clinical illness, from bipolar disorders.
thanks for this question ,
idiom with distinguish vanished from my brain, thot both r rt .. 'distinguish x from y' and 'distinguish between ..and ..'
i went thro my notes again and that confirms distinguish between x and y is correct idiom
(A)pronounced alterations in mood, which may be frequent and occasionally severe without their constituting a clinical illness, from bipolar disorders
(B)bipolar disorders and pronounced alterations in mood, occurring frequently and occasionally severely, without constituting a clinical illness
(C)pronounced alterations in mood, perhaps frequent and occasionally severe without constituting a clinical illness, and bipolar disorders
(D)between pronounced alterations in mood, which may be frequent and occasionally severe without constituting a clinical illness, from bipolar disorders
(E)between pronounced alterations in mood, which may be frequent and occasionally severe without constituting a clinical illness, and bipolar disorders
so one direct shot E is rt.
Question: After the company recalled one of its best-selling products, it would be forced to accept a one billion dollar loss, an expense that would have forced its main competitor to declare bankruptcy if it had suffered such a loss.
(A)After the company recalled one of its best-selling products, it would be forced to accept a one billion dollar loss, an expense that would have forced its main competitor to declare bankruptcy if it had suffered such a loss.
(B)As the company recalled one of its best-selling products, it accepted a one billion dollar loss; forcing its main competitor to declare bankruptcy if it had suffered such a loss.
(C)After the company recalled one of its best-selling products, its one billion dollar loss would have to be accepted; such a loss would have forced its main competitor to declare bankruptcy.
(D)After the company recalled one of its best-selling products, it was forced to accept a one billion dollar loss; its main competitor would have been forced to declare bankruptcy
if it had suffered such a loss.
(E)When the company recalled one of its best-selling products, a one billion dollar loss it was forced to accept, an expense that would have forced its main competitor
into bankruptcy.
My ans is different from others' here .. please correct my reasoning, if im wrong somewhere.
In first go i have eliminated
B,D,E
B, D for wrong usage of IF clause,
If jack had won the lottery, he would have given me $1000.
If jack won the lottery, he would give me $1000.
usage of other tense here is wrong
I eliminated E for awkward construction.
Then Between A, C.
I eliminated C for passive structure .. to be accepted ...
Left with A.


Someone Please correct me here.

Please post OAs..

rgds-
sri

Originally Posted by ponds_ggn View Post
Hi Guys,
Try these:
Question: In a seminar paper delivered at the annual American Psychological Association conference, Dr. Spagnoli distinguished pronounced alterations in mood, which may be frequent and occasionally severe without their constituting a clinical illness, from bipolar disorders.
(A)pronounced alterations in mood, which may be frequent and occasionally severe without their constituting a clinical illness, from bipolar disorders
(B)bipolar disorders and pronounced alterations in mood, occurring frequently and occasionally severely, without constituting a clinical illness
(C)pronounced alterations in mood, perhaps frequent and occasionally severe without constituting a clinical illness, and bipolar disorders
(D)between pronounced alterations in mood, which may be frequent and occasionally severe without constituting a clinical illness, from bipolar disorders
(E)between pronounced alterations in mood, which may be frequent and occasionally severe without constituting a clinical illness, and bipolar disorders
Question: After the company recalled one of its best-selling products, it would be forced to accept a one billion dollar loss, an expense that would have forced its main competitor to declare bankruptcy if it had suffered such a loss.
(A)After the company recalled one of its best-selling products, it would be forced to accept a one billion dollar loss, an expense that would have forced its main competitor to declare bankruptcy if it had suffered such a loss.
(B)As the company recalled one of its best-selling products, it accepted a one billion dollar loss; forcing its main competitor to declare bankruptcy if it had suffered such a loss.
(C)After the company recalled one of its best-selling products, its one billion dollar loss would have to be accepted; such a loss would have forced its main competitor to declare bankruptcy.
(D)After the company recalled one of its best-selling products, it was forced to accept a one billion dollar loss; its main competitor would have been forced to declare bankruptcy if it had suffered such a loss.
(E)When the company recalled one of its best-selling products, a one billion dollar loss it was forced to accept, an expense that would have forced its main competitor into bankruptcy.


Vyomb,
you may be right abt usage of ';' but i doubt whether usage of if clause is correct in D.

Please check/justify.

Q1

My answer is boldened.

Explanation:
1-It is a 3-2 split.
2-Correct idiom is distinguish between x and y.It is good if we remember the idiom and its usage, it helps in elimination.Eliminate option A, B, C and D.

Q2
My answer is boldened.

Explanation:
1-It is a 3-2 split.
2-As is used to provide example.When is conditional also awkward construction.Eliminate B and E.
3-Use of semicolon and comma.In correct use of semicolon and comma in C and A.After a semicolon an independent sentence should be framed.
Someone Please correct me here.

Please post OAs..

rgds-
sri


Hi Srijack,

Your first Answer is right; as you can have a look in some previous post, I`ve posted OA's for both the questions.

Anyways I`m posting OA for second question again here with explanation you selected a wrong option(Option-A). It contains verb-tense error.

We begin with After the company recalled and then move to it would be forced, but since the sentence is talking about something that already happened, the second verb should be it was forced. Eliminate (A) and (C). You can also eliminate (E) for offering the strange variation a one billion dollar loss it was forced to accept. (B) is wrong because it creates a sentence fragment. Make sure you know this fact: a semicolon is correct only when it joins two pieces that could stand as independent and complete sentences. In other words, you can use a semicolon only if you could use a period at the same place and still have complete sentences. (B) doesn't do that, so (D) remains.
OA is Option-D.


cheers buddy !

:cheers:
Vyomb,
you may be right abt usage of ';' but i doubt whether usage of if clause is correct in D.

Please check/justify.



Yes,Sri you are right ( my guess) ...however GMAT is also about choosing the best option.When we look at the other option,there are even grave errors in them...

by the way,just googled to find the usage of if/whether ...and found this.

http://www.cambridge.org/elt/commonmistakes/downloads/9780521692472p10-11.pdf
( just started reading this ) ...
"
We use
if to talk about a hypothetical possibility, especially in conditional sentences:
I would only go home if it was a real emergency.
Give me a call
if there are any problems.
(Problems are only a possibility.)
"

hope this helps.

all the best and lets rock!

Ironically,the first page ( total pages 2 ) itself gave the answer :



We use
whether where we are considering two possibilities:

I don't know whether to have the beef or the lamb.
Many students have to get part-time jobs whether or not they want to.

and the usage of if has been copied in the previous post.


My take ...the usage of If is correct/

if anyone finds a better explanation ..please let us know.

Sri,my apologies for wavering from my initial take/guess.

baroniapreeti Says
hi I am planning to give gmat in sept and i have hard doing sentence Correction question , please help .Also i wanted to know i have that 1000 SC's questions but dunt have a solution to it .So can you please tell me from whr to get that


You can go throughe "Mahnattan senctence correction Guide". This book is considered to be the bible for the SC section. For practice, refer to OG.
1000SC are good but they don't have any answer explanations, only the answer keys and many of them are wrong. So it's halrdly of any use.

Hope this helps.

Regards,
Anubhav
Question:The architect proposed that supplies for the new wing of the hospital, which hospital administrators hoped to open by the end of the year, will be procured from local providers.
(A)that supplies for the new wing of the hospital, which hospital administrators hoped to open by the end of the year, will be
(B)that supplies for the hospital's new wing, which hospital administrators hope to be opened by the end of the year, be
(C)that the hospital's new wing's supplies, which hospital administrators hope to be opened by year's end, might be
(D)that supplies for the new wing of the hospital, which hospital administrators hope to be open by the end of the year, were
(E) that supplies for the hospital's new wing, which hospital administrators hope to open by the end of the year, be



Hi puys,

As most of you got it right.
OA is Option-E

Explanation:
1)Tense error in other options.
2)Misplaced modifier.(which near noun).


cheers !
:cheers:

that was really nice...Post some new problems please...

My answer is boldened.

1-Subjunctive construction.Use of that is correct.Modifier which is near the noun wing.
2-Present Tense.Eliminate A, B ,C and D which used hoped ,opened and were.
puys please come up with your explanation also.


why we have used here "Hospital's wings " and not " wings of the Hospital" ?
what is the difference?
when to use it the other way?

I thought that if the subject is real ( man ,dog ,rabbit etc ) we should go for the first one.
and for all non living we shld go for second one.

hand of Raj ... WRONG
Raj's hand ... CORRECT

River's bank ... WRONG
bank of the River.... CORRECT...

Can anyone throw some light on this?

Hello guys, I joined this forum yesterday with hopes to share knowledge/experience with all wonderful people around.
I am planning to take my test sometime by Aug EOM and therefore I can feel my track is getting hotter day by day. lol.
Lets rock n roll..

i am taking GMAT on 30th of july !!!

Hey Harsh, good luck buddy!! You must be on fire I am sure :)
Please share your experience with us.

surely !!! If I get 750+...
wish me luck !!!

Harsh,

Apostrophe is used to indicate ownership for example Ram's book.
Are you sure River's bank is incorrect usage? I wouldnt mind using it though.
In regard to this SC problem, we prefer hospital's wing because of the ", which hospital administrators.." right after it. here "which" must be used for the new wing and not the hospital( as in D. wing of the hospital, which..").

HTH.

Harsh,

Apostrophe is used to indicate ownership for example Ram's book.
Are you sure River's bank is incorrect usage? I wouldnt mind using it though.
In regard to this SC problem, we prefer hospital's wing because of the ", which hospital administrators.." right after it. here "which" must be used for the new wing and not the hospital( as in D. wing of the hospital, which..").

HTH.


Nice Explanation.
Thanks for it !!!

One of Ronald Reagans first acts as President was to rescind President Carters directive that any chemical banned on medical grounds in the United States be prohibited from sale to other countries.

(A) that any chemical banned on medical grounds in the United States be prohibited from sale to other countries

(B) that any chemical be prohibited from sale to other countries that was banned on medical grounds in the United States

(C) prohibiting the sale to other countries of any chemical banned on medical grounds in the United States

(D) prohibiting that any chemical banned on medical grounds in the United States is sold to other countries

(E) that any chemical banned in the United States on medical grounds is prohibited from being sold to other countri