GMAT Sentence Correction Discussions

According to National Institute of Health, much of the sleep-deprived people would benefit from a short "power nap" during the day

a.
b.
c. many sleep-deprived people
d.
e. many of the sleep-deprived people

options left unmentioned aren't worth considering;so I save myself the pain in typing :D


I think National institute of health is not concerned abt specific group of sleep-deproved ppl.

so IMO .. C is the ans...

OA pls..
one more.....


In his work, George Santayana is more reminiscent of Plato's poetic narratives and Henry David Thoreau's obsessive detailing than Bertrand Russell's scientific precisions.
A. In his work, George Santayana is more reminiscent of
B. George Santayana writes more like
C. George Santayana reminds one more of
D. George Santayana's work is more reminiscent of
E. George Santayana's work more resembles that of


Hi,
My vote is for option-D. More idiomatic and precisely clear sententence formation.

Cheers !
I have a clarification. is there a difference between two sentences below:

a. I need burger, fries, and soda
b. I need burger, fries and soda

Notice the comma between "fries" and "and". Please respond.


Hi bizzareNym,

There are two conditions:

1) If the sentence is ending with noun, in this case "soda".
Option-B is correct.

2) If the sentence is long and after the word "soda" some other words are there,and referring to soda itself in that case Option-A is correct.


cheers !
:cheers:
Hey Pagals, try these :

1.Distinguished architecture requires the expenditure of large sums of money, even if it is by no means certain that the expenditure of large sums of money produce distinguished architecture.
(A) even if it is by no means certain that the expenditure of large sums of money produce
(B) even if it is by no means certain that the expenditure of large sums of money will produce
(C) even though there is no certainty that the expenditure of money in large sums produces
(D) even though it is by no means certain that the expenditure of large sums of money produce
(E) though there is no certainty as to the expenditure of money in large sums producing

between C and E..

E . ...wrong usage of SO X AS Y..(thr right usage is SO AS TO )

IMO - C
2.
The new regulations mandate that a company allows their retiring employees who would otherwise lose group health care coverage to continue the same insurance at their own expense for a specific period.
a) same
b) companies to allow their retiring employees who would otherwise lose group health care coverage that they can continue
c) that a company allow its retiring emloyees who would otherwis lose group health care coverage to continue
d) .... ( πŸ˜› Dil Chahta hai )
e) companies to allow a retiring employee whose group health care covergae would otherwise be lost the coninuation of
no idea about the options given...please make them underline...

though seems to be coming from Subjunctive...call between b/c..
required EMPLOYEES...
my take C

3.
Although it claims to delve into political issues, television can be superficial such as when each of the three major networks broadcast exactly the same statement from a political candidate.
(A) superficial such as when each of the three major networks
(B) superficial, as can sometimes occur if all of the three major networks
(C) superficial if the three major networks all
(D) superficial whenever each of the three major networks
(E) superficial, as when the three major networks each


Some one posted it back some time, I guess...

Broadcast...need plural subject..B/C/E..

Need AS....the clause comparison before comma..

Occuer....only used for any netuarl phenomenon etc...

E..IMO
one more.....


In his work, George Santayana is more reminiscent of Plato's poetic narratives and Henry David Thoreau's obsessive detailing than Bertrand Russells scientific precisions.
A. In his work, George Santayana is more reminiscent of
B. George Santayana writes more like
C. George Santayana reminds one more of
D. George Santayana's work is more reminiscent of
E. George Santayanas work more resembles that of


Possessive poison.... .. + Comparion of the works...not the individuals..

call between -> D/E

D) My IMO..

reason "that of"..is unnecessary here...because, Plato's poetic narratives means the "poetic narratives of plato"...
now replace this in D..

The work of George Santayana is more reminiscent of poetic narratives of plato

OR in E

The work of George Santayana more resembles the work of poetic narratives of plato..

make a call?...what say..
According to National Institute of Health, much of the sleep-deprived people would benefit from a short "power nap" during the day

a.
b.
c. many sleep-deprived people
d.
e. many of the sleep-deprived people

options left unmentioned aren't worth considering;so I save myself the pain in typing :D


Hey BN,
whats the OA pls?

Hello Puys,

This post is different from my earlier posts:grin:, I took my GMAT yesterday morning in pearson center Delhi. The Reason of posting it here is, from past one month this has been my default page in my laptop. As some of you must be knowing(although through pvt messages:)) about my G-Day and the kind of nervousness I had. When I finished my verbal and, I chose for seeing my result. Those 10 secs were tough
And phew!

------------------------------------------------------------------------
Quant : 48 (84 Percentile)
Verbal: 39 (87 Percentile)
========================================================
TOTAL: 710 (92 Percentile)

------------------------------------------------------------------------
This message flashed out.

I thanked god with this score, and Procter congratulated me with printout without disturbing others.They again took my palm print and I came out silently.

My Journey: I kept balance between my official work and GMAT. I decided to prepare for GMAT in the last week of May'09. But I had no clue about materials and strategy for it, here PG played most of the role about getting materials, importance of each section and how to attack GMAT.I went to few of the roadshows and talked with alumnae over there, about GMAT scores and preparation required for it, everyone was saying 1(one) week:grin:, I was astonished to hear it(I know they were exaggerating the things, but believe me guys 2 months are more than enough for it).In fact I have started silently admiring this exam, which tests your calmness,nerves and smart choice of options under stressed condition.I thought of giving best shot with my disposable time(2 months) in last week of July.I had small issue regarding booking of date, which I booked as late as first week of July.I took the following tests while preparation:

Manhattan: 650 (2 weeks before G-Day)
Gmat Prep1:570 (In the beginning)
Gmat Prep2 : 690(1 week before the test)(with so many repeated questions in it)
I didn't give Kaplan Tests(I wanted to be positive before G-Day:)).
On G-Day:

First I got option to choose five schools, I had issue in it and one of the employee asked me the choices and filled for me.Then immediately AWA started.

AWA: I did no preparation for it, just glanced OG's AWA,I got some link of it and puys helped me(Vyomb,priyank12).My argument and essay both were easy and I wrote lavishly about it in four paragraphs.

Quant Section:Even though coming from IT Background I was nervous about some of the areas, but thankfully not encounterd them in actual GMAT.I could have increased my score in it with more attention.I finished this section before time with more than 2 mins left.

Verbal Section:I went with composed mind started attacking diligently, I did not wasted more time in initial 10 questions, Q.8 I got RC although big one of 4 questions, overall I received 4 RC passages. And able to finish in time the whole section, paid more respect to SC and squeezed CR and RC time.I could have scored more in RC, now I feel.

I got two 8 mins break, some time missed while getting up and again giving right hand palm prints while coming out and going to your seat(so total 5 min break only).Finished my RedBull two times and drank lots of water to keep my mind hydrated.

I owe this success to fellow puys(amsey1382, the_hate, srijack, vyomb, papa ji, roadside_cafe, vikram2010,BizzareNym, nuttyVarun, VIKX, Gatty07, guy with gutts, sdt83,@nee, pearlcrystal, Mcnabb_ISB,tarun_b, sidharthaduggirala, priyank12, Deepakram, Bhavin, Rajvedi & many more).Although not in this order, most of you have contributed in my score by posting questions, answering with explanation,giving suggestions and sharing of knowledge(timely GYAN) bhai log.Enjoy the process of going through the turmoils for G-Day:lookround:.

Material which I used:


OG 10,11,12
Kaplan Primier Edition and Verbal WorkBook.
Kaplan 800.
Manhattan SC (3rd Edition).
Spidey SC Notes.
Read Quant from web.


Tips:Take care of your health while preparation,once booked the date changing of it will cost you.Prepare from computer, coz you will be quite comfortable in actual test, during break dont drink too much water since these tests are more stressful than india-pakistan cricket encounter.Prepare yourself with enough stamina for 4 hours of stress.

ALL THE BEST P-Folks !


CHEERS !
:cheers:

I have a clarification. is there a difference between two sentences below:

a. I need burger, fries, and soda
b. I need burger, fries and soda

Notice the comma between "fries" and "and". Please respond.


Well grammatically both are correct.....surprise surprise..

and it also depneds upon what meaning you are trying to draw form them.. ...

What matters the most is GMAT....go for A) buddy..

any list of actions, nouns etc...need an "AND" in the last/to be complete...

Any GYAN from PUYS...:lookround::lookround:

cheers
Hello Puys,

This post is different from earlier posts, I took my GMAT yesterday morning in pearson center Delhi.The Reason of posting it here is, from past one month this has been my default page in my laptop.As some of you must be knowing(although through pvt messages:)) about my G-Day and the kind of nervousness I had. When I finished my verbal and, I chose for seeing my result.Those 10 secs were tough
And phew!

------------------------------------------------------------------------
Quant : 48 (84 Percentile)
Verbal: 39 (87 Percentile)
=========================================================
TOTAL: 710 (92 Percentile)
-------------------------------------------------------------------------
This message flashed out.

I thanked god with this score, and Procter congratulated me with printout without disturbing other.They again took my palm print and I came out silently.

My Journey: I kept balance between my official work and GMat. I decided to prepare for GMAT in the last week of May'09.But I had no clue about materials and strategy for it, here PG played most of the role about getting materials, importance of each section and how to attack GMAT.I went to few of the roadshows and talked with alumanae over there about GMAT scores and prepration required for it, everyone was saying 1(one) week:grin:, I was astonished to hear it(I know they were exaggerating the things, but believe me guys 2 months are more than enough for it).Infact I have started silently admiring this exam, which tests your calmness,nerves and smart choice of options under stressed condition.I thought of giving best shot with my disposable time(2 months) in last week of July.I had small issue regarding booking of date, which I booked as late as first week of July.I took the following tests while preparation:

Manhattan: 650 (2 weeks before G-Day)
Gmat Prep1:570 (In the begining)
Gmat Prep2 : 690(1 week before the test)(with so many repeated questions in it)
I didn't give Kaplan Tests(I wanted to be positive before G-Day:)).
On G-Day:

First I got option to choose five schools, I had issue in it and one of the employee asked me the choices and filled for me.Then immidiately AWA started.

AWA: I did no preparation for it, just glanced OG's AWA,I got some link of it and puys helped me(vyomb,priyank12).My argument and essay both were easy and I wrote lavishly about it in four paragraphs.

Quant Section:Even though coming from IT Background I was nervous about some of the areas, but thankfully not encounterd them in actual GMAT.I could have increased my score in it with more attention.I finished this section before time with more than 2 mins left.

Verbal Section:I went with composed mind started attacking diligently, I did not wasted more time in initial 10 questions, Q.8 I got RC although big one of 4 questions, overall I received 4 RC passages. And able to finish in time the whole section, paid more respect to SC and squeezed CR and RC time.I could have scored more in RC, now I feel.

I got two 8 mins break, some time missed while getting up and again giving right hand palm prints while coming and going to your seat(so total 5 min break only).Finished my RedBull two times and drank lots of water to keep my mind hydrated.

I owe this success to fellow puys(amsey1382,the_hate,srijack,vyomb,papa ji,roadside_cafe,vikram2010,BizzareNym,nuttyVarun,VIKX,Gatty07,guy with gutts,sdt83,@nee,pearlcrystal,Mcnabb_ISB,tarun_b,sidhartaduggirala& many more).Although not in this order, most of you have contributed in my score by posting questions, answering with explanation,giving suggestions and sharing of knowledge bhai log.Enjoy the process of going through the turmoils for G-Day.

Material which I used:

OG 10,11,12
Kaplan Primear edition and verbal.
Kaplan 800
Manhattan SC (3rd Edition).
Spidey SC Notes.
Read Quant from web.


Tip:Take care of your health while preparation,once booked the date changing of it will cost you.Prepare from computer, you will comfortable in actual test, during break dont drink too much water since these tests are more stressful than india-pakistan cricket encounter.Prepare yourself with enough stamina for 4 hours of stress.

ALL THE BEST P-Folks !


CHEERS !
:cheers:



Hey PONDS.....cool...yes i've seen you active on SC like anything....welldone buddy....."Phatte chak diye"...:cheerio::clap::clap::clap:
Hello Puys,

This post is different from my earlier posts, I took my GMAT yesterday morning in pearson center Delhi.The Reason of posting it here is, from past one month this has been my default page in my laptop.As some of you must be knowing(although through pvt messages:)) about my G-Day and the kind of nervousness I had. When I finished my verbal and, I chose for seeing my result.Those 10 secs were tough
And phew!

------------------------------------------------------------------------
Quant : 48 (84 Percentile)
Verbal: 39 (87 Percentile)
========================================================
TOTAL: 710 (92 Percentile)
------------------------------------------------------------------------
This message flashed out.

I thanked god with this score, and Procter congratulated me with printout without disturbing other.They again took my palm print and I came out silently.

My Journey: I kept balance between my official work and GMat. I decided to prepare for GMAT in the last week of May'09. But I had no clue about materials and strategy for it, here PG played most of the role about getting materials, importance of each section and how to attack GMAT.I went to few of the roadshows and talked with alumnae over there, about GMAT scores and preparation required for it, everyone was saying 1(one) week:grin:, I was astonished to hear it(I know they were exaggerating the things, but believe me guys 2 months are more than enough for it).Infact I have started silently admiring this exam, which tests your calmness,nerves and smart choice of options under stressed condition.I thought of giving best shot with my disposable time(2 months) in last week of July.I had small issue regarding booking of date, which I booked as late as first week of July.I took the following tests while preparation:

Manhattan: 650 (2 weeks before G-Day)
Gmat Prep1:570 (In the beginning)
Gmat Prep2 : 690(1 week before the test)(with so many repeated questions in it)
I didn't give Kaplan Tests(I wanted to be positive before G-Day:)).
On G-Day:

First I got option to choose five schools, I had issue in it and one of the employee asked me the choices and filled for me.Then immediately AWA started.

AWA: I did no preparation for it, just glanced OG's AWA,I got some link of it and puys helped me(vyomb,priyank12).My argument and essay both were easy and I wrote lavishly about it in four paragraphs.

Quant Section:Even though coming from IT Background I was nervous about some of the areas, but thankfully not encounterd them in actual GMAT.I could have increased my score in it with more attention.I finished this section before time with more than 2 mins left.

Verbal Section:I went with composed mind started attacking diligently, I did not wasted more time in initial 10 questions, Q.8 I got RC although big one of 4 questions, overall I received 4 RC passages. And able to finish in time the whole section, paid more respect to SC and squeezed CR and RC time.I could have scored more in RC, now I feel.

I got two 8 mins break, some time missed while getting up and again giving right hand palm prints while coming out and going to your seat(so total 5 min break only).Finished my RedBull two times and drank lots of water to keep my mind hydrated.

I owe this success to fellow puys(amsey1382, the_hate, srijack, vyomb, papa ji, roadside_cafe, vikram2010,BizzareNym, nuttyVarun, VIKX, Gatty07, guy with gutts, sdt83,@nee, pearlcrystal, Mcnabb_ISB,tarun_b, sidharthaduggirala, priyank12 & many more).Although not in this order, most of you have contributed in my score by posting questions, answering with explanation,giving suggestions and sharing of knowledge(timely GYAN) bhai log.Enjoy the process of going through the turmoils for G-Day.

Material which I used:

OG 10,11,12
Kaplan Primier Edition and verbal.
Kaplan 800
Manhattan SC (3rd Edition).
Spidey SC Notes.
Read Quant from web.


Tip:Take care of your health while preparation,once booked the date changing of it will cost you.Prepare from computer, you will be comfortable in actual test, during break dont drink too much water since these tests are more stressful than india-pakistan cricket encounter.Prepare yourself with enough stamina for 4 hours of stress.

ALL THE BEST P-Folks !


CHEERS !
:cheers:


Hey Ponds,Congrats! mast phoda!
chalo aaj :drinking:party :D

n all the best for applying...which colleges are you aiming at?
Possessive poison.... .. + Comparion of the works...not the individuals..

call between -> D/E

D) My IMO..

reason "that of"..is unnecessary here...because, Plato's poetic narratives means the "poetic narratives of plato"...
now replace this in D..

The work of George Santayana is more reminiscent of poetic narratives of plato

OR in E

The work of George Santayana more resembles the work of poetic narratives of plato..

make a call?...what say..



Hey amsey,
yep...in E,if it were just 'resembles'...it would have been a close call.As of now,'resembles that of' is unnecessary.

Thanks for attempting.

PG Rocks!

OA is C.
Explanation says that E is wordy. Is it?

According to National Institute of Health, much of the sleep-deprived people would benefit from a short "power nap" during the day

a.
b.
c. many sleep-deprived people
d.
e. many of the sleep-deprived people

options left unmentioned aren't worth considering;so I save myself the pain in typing :D
OA is C.
Explanation says that E is wordy. Is it?


this one is subtle...

Someone posted the resoning for this....but this one may be addressed from school basics...(sorry if i sound like preaching...:grin:)

"The"...definite article...used for something which is definite...THE RAMAYAN, THE GANGES...in short one which is the Only One (look at the usage of the in my sentence too, i'm referring to also something definite here)...

Now comes the big question...

"the deprived people" - its not WRONG, if we are talking about a specific group of sleep deprived people....but a genric study seems to be talking about in general for those who are sleeping deprived and not in general about those who come from a specific group which consists of sleeping deprived people...

so no need for definite article "THE" here..

cheers:thumbsup:

ahhh.. now it makes sense. generic vs specific. the or no the.
added one more to my SC arsenal

this one is subtle...

Someone posted the resoning for this....but this one may be addressed from school basics...(sorry if i sound like preaching...:grin:)

"The"...definite article...used for something which is definite...THE RAMAYAN, THE GANGES...in short one which is the Only One (look at the usage of the in my sentence too, i'm referring to also something definite here)...

Now comes the big question...

"the deprived people" - its not WRONG, if we are talking about a specific group of sleep deprived people....but a genric study seems to be talking about in general for those who are sleeping deprived and not in general about those who come from a specific group which consists of sleeping deprived people...

so no need for definite article "THE" here..

cheers:thumbsup:
this one is subtle...

Someone posted the resoning for this....but this one may be addressed from school basics...(sorry if i sound like preaching...:grin:)

"The"...definite article...used for something which is definite...THE RAMAYAN, THE GANGES...in short one which is the Only One (look at the usage of the in my sentence too, i'm referring to also something definite here)...

Now comes the big question...

"the deprived people" - its not WRONG, if we are talking about a specific group of sleep deprived people....but a genric study seems to be talking about in general for those who are sleeping deprived and not in general about those who come from a specific group which consists of sleeping deprived people...

so no need for definite article "THE" here..

cheers:thumbsup:


Hey Amsey,
the question i here have is ....of all the sleep deprived people..will everyone will be taking a power nap ...and besides..is it that many can stand in for all?

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According to National Institute of Health, much of the sleep-deprived people would benefit from a short "power nap" during the day

a.
b.
c. many sleep-deprived people
d.
e. many of the sleep-deprived people
--------------------------------------------------------------------
Hey Amsey,
the question i here have is ....of all the sleep deprived people..will everyone will be taking a power nap ...and besides..is it that many can stand in for all?

-----------------------------------------------------------
According to National Institute of Health, much of the sleep-deprived people would benefit from a short "power nap" during the day
a.
b.
c. many sleep-deprived people
d.
e. many of the sleep-deprived people
--------------------------------------------------------------------


Answer to 2nd..Yes, MUCH is the proper use here and Not MANY...
Answer to 1st..well...in current format..Many sleep dprived people is right usage...
but if it were the call between: Much sleep deprived people OR much of the sleep deprived people, then yes the answer definitely would be the later one:
MUCH of the sleep deprived people...

Hope that helps..

Cheers
Well grammatically both are correct.....surprise surprise..

and it also depneds upon what meaning you are trying to draw form them.. ...

What matters the most is GMAT....go for A) buddy..

any list of actions, nouns etc...need an "AND" in the last/to be complete...

Any GYAN from PUYS...:lookround::lookround:

cheers


Guys GMAT uses comma before and. So please beware of this and always choose the option with comma.

Please explain your decisions

At Shiprock, New Mexico, a perennially powerful girls' high school basketball team has become a path to college for some and a source of pride for a community where the household incomes of 49 percent of them are below the poverty level.

(A) where the household incomes of 49 percent of them are
(B) where they have 49 percent of the household incomes
(C) where 49 percent of the household incomes are
(D) which has 49 percent of the household incomes
(E) in which 49 percent of them have household incomes

My pick D
Here "some" and "community" should be in parallel. Community is not a place therefore "where" incorrect. A,B, and C are thus out.

in E, "in which" doesnt make any sense either. Besides, who is "them".
Left with D finally.


Please explain your decisions

At Shiprock, New Mexico, a perennially powerful girls' high school basketball team has become a path to college for some and a source of pride for a community where the household incomes of 49 percent of them are below the poverty level.

(A) where the household incomes of 49 percent of them are
(B) where they have 49 percent of the household incomes
(C) where 49 percent of the household incomes are
(D) which has 49 percent of the household incomes
(E) in which 49 percent of them have household incomes

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Please explain your decisions

At Shiprock, New Mexico, a perennially powerful girls high school basketball team has become a path to college for some and a source of pride for a community where the household incomes of 49 percent of them are below the poverty level.

(A) where the household incomes of 49 percent of them are
(B) where they have 49 percent of the household incomes
(C) where 49 percent of the household incomes are
(D) which has 49 percent of the household incomes
(E) in which 49 percent of them have household incomes


My Answer is in color:
Logically sentence is correct, tense error are not present and maintains parallelism, more idiomatic"where are" compared to "where of".

Cheers !
:cheers:

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